This doujin was published as part of the Translation Update of the week of the 24th.
Translator: strib
Editor: robert

Doujins.com link:https://doujins.com/original-doujins-series/hg-chagawa-you-were-taken-gently-side-story-momota-nanoha-vol-2-81830

Author milking it as much as he can until it dries off to the point of breaking the characters.

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MMF? Where is MMF?

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what the hell? are the girls just not going to address the elephant in the room? The fucking boyfriend?
What the heck happened to the BF, Haruta? They're just not gonna talk about it?

fucking lame

Base +6, Roger28 -6, BamBlackStar +7, deth212 +6, Vivi1993 +22, vllx6 -6

@ChronicLogic I don’t think Haruta was a boyfriend to begin with let alone in the running to be one.

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@giga_64 Yeah, Rio was just a pretend girlfriend to Haruta just to cater to Kaito's fetish.

So, is Chagawa gonna try and keep this side story going when Kaito's already bagged her and had the threesome here? Just seems kinda pointless to keep flogging this dead horse.

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Now give us "happy ending".

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It's good for the first 4 chapter. Now the artist milk it too much and its lost their charm already.

I mean, we still even need ntr tag ? Haruki (or Haruto can't remember) are out of place and no longer has anything to do with this already. At this point, the art and sex screen too are just become worst and look so lame.

Last edited on 27 August 2024, 13:28.

Base +7, Bay K.W. Arde +9, BamBlackStar -7, deth212 +6, Serverclosed +6

Well it exists.

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I hope he makes full color versions for all parts of the series.

RAW: /g/2834756/723e1bf2a3/
Part 1: /g/3027971/72a78d258d/

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Today we fap in group!

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There's not NTR but let's see where this goes.

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Meanwhile Haruto is probably six feet under, after the love of his life and his best childhood friend drove a knife laced with salt on his back and turned it sideways... for the fun of the fetish.

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Hmm. After translating the afterword, seems like his next work is going to be more NTR for a housewife. Think it's safe to just put bro on a blacklist and call it good.

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I thought that the author previously said that he was going to focus on the main kid that got cucked and give him a better ending? I guess that was a lie. Meh.

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We need either of 3 endings, typical NTR slop of the "beta" becoming a full blown cuck and masturbating to porn or IRL sex of the two girls with the other dude, a happy ending where he just finds a love that the bastard wont steal, or a dark ending where both girls get depressed when they find out their whoriness caused that "beta" guy to seppuku. But something tells me that author even if would use the 3rd scenario, the girls and the asshole wouldn't give a single fuck and actually lol at the idea that they hurt the cuck so much he logged out of life.

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Wheres the NTR even? This is just MFF harem

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