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Commissioned by: Anon
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Gimai-Chan No Iutoori!
Onii-chan wa yurusanzo!
Haha ga Saikon shitara Gikei ga Chou Kuzu na Motokare Chapter 1

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finaly some godly shit this artist has a bright future also lot of improvement between the first released chapter and this one he tweaked a lot of things.

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GOD I LOVE GYARUS SO MUCH

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The typesetting looks off. Is the translation good, though?
Can someone confirm?

Base +6, Velliss +6, juanchotazo463 +6, hobohobo +36, wootwoot123 +6, dark-shini013 -7

What I love about Poccora's works is how much he changes up hairstyles. They all look good.

Base +6, Bubblejum +6, juanchotazo463 +6, huntmonster +6, hardwithstyle +6

Shame it wasn't /g/2255700/5e72114fd9/ that was translated, that one is even better.
Thought this one is godly as well.

Base +6, huntmonster +6, juanchotazo463 +6

This seems like MTL without openly saying its MTL.

Base +7, raemew -8

That was incredible

Base +20

It's not a perfect translation (quite a few typos, some minor translation errors, some things translated far too literally, some things translated far too liberally), but it doesn't seem like MTL. For example, I think a MTL would have probably messed up the text at the top of p4 (though that is also an example of something that's probably far too liberal with rough yen->dollar conversions).

It's accurate enough that the general meaning of the text is being conveyed the vast majority of the time and nothing so egregious that it really makes a difference.

The original text is also just stilted in places so it might seem weird. It is what it is.

Base +12, GigantRegis +7, RubyRoy +6

@rqwrqw, I did take the liberty of changing the currency just because some people say they find it hard to quantify it in their brain.
I think it might've been the font choice. i tried going with these fonts because the boxes were too small in some places i could've switched up fonts in between but that seemed to break the flow.
As for the rest, it was a matter of conveying the context better.
For the typos, i did go through it two times and fixed all that i found. Could you please dm me the typos you found? thanks!

Also, I'm looking for a proofreader, if anyone is up for it please email me at: [email protected] or discord: carlstrider

Base +6, pilly nutty +9

I don't recall all the typos I saw, but there were a few examples of repeating text (e.g. p13 ("how many dicks have dicks have"), p19 ("make me orgasm me")) and other actual typos like "quiet" instead of "quite" on p12 and then other cases where it's just not great grammar (e.g. "that fact that..." on p3 instead of "the fact that", or the lack of comma between "that" and "right" after that). Those are some I remember off the top of my head but I recall seeing more.

I'm not really interested in doing a full proof-read, I was more just commenting on it because some people were asking about the translation quality and I think it's good enough despite the typos and whatnot, it's just not perfect.

Base +12

ah, i didn't notice those. i think i might've doubled the text in some places when i was copying from the script, will fix them as soon as i can!

Base +6