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Tagging rough translation:

02
OG:帰れば可愛い奥さんが待ってる新婚生活っ
TL:When you come back home, you have a wife waiting for you. Newlywed life must be great.
ED:Missing 可愛い

02
OG:今度俺にも紹介しろよな～
TL:You should introduce her to us one of these days.
ED:Just him 俺にも

02
OG:お疲れ様です
TL:"giving my best..."
ED:Otsukaresama in this context means bye.

03
OG:婿入り嫁なのにお金は全部夫もちだったらしいよ
TL:Even though it was a marriage, he was footing all the bills.
ED:This sentence is nonsensical because you're missing 婿入り嫁

03
OG:建売とはいえ新築一戸建てでローンも一人で抱えちゃって...
TL:That new home they bought, he was the one that took the bank loan for it.
ED:Missing 建売とはいえ新築一戸建て

03
OG:しかも奥さんち母子家庭で大変だからって義母と義妹まで同居
TL:Even more so, his wife's family had economic problems so he decided to take care of her mother and sister-in-law as well, in their home.
ED:Missing 母子家庭. Also her should be his.

03
OG:前からいい奴だとは思ってたけど
TL:He's a really kind man, but I think...
ED:"I've had the impression he was a nice fellow all this time..."

03
OG:ほんと... やっぱり男は「優しいだけ」じゃダメよねぇ...
TL:After all, you can't indulge yourself by just being kind.
ED:I have no idea what you mean by indulging yourself here. A rough TL of this line would be something like "Being nice isn't enough to survive in this world". Something along those lines.

05
OG:二人とも
TL:With both of you.
ED:He's back with both of them?

06
OG:「妻よりはるかに極上の」「ふたりの家との新婚生活だ」
TL:Now I enjoy a new newlywed life with 2 new women that are better than my wife.
ED:Better is an understatement for はるかに極上. Also, missing ふたりの家.

08
OG:正一さん...もう飲みすぎないほうが...
TL:Shoichi-san, stop drinking, please...
ED:This is a suggestion. "I think it'd be better if you..."

09
OG:アンタの娘が新築一戸建てが良いっていうから無理して買った！
TL:Your daughter said a new home would be great so I agreed to buy a new one.
ED:Missing 新築一戸建. 無理して買った he didn't just agree, he went into debt to buy the house.

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Other langauges and versions:

Japanese (RAW): /g/2484634/0c11a6832c/
Chinese (Translation): /g/2570563/867ea120fd/
Korean (Translation): /g/2589636/0ac188094d/
Spanish (Translation): /g/2836953/a53aeafdd2/
Portuguese (Translation): /g/2810238/1c79f6cb6d/

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so... where's the defloration?

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Can't wait to see the rest of it.

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