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这结局...一时分不清是母猪堕落还是现在这个好了

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第一部堂堂完結

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金针菇就算了吧，女主的备胎罢了，这结局。。。真的一坨

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能继续看还是好的 希望妹妹和妈妈篇也能给点情节 好喜欢妹妹跟妈妈

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画成正常的长度也能使这个结局可以接受点。。md整这么小，气笑了真的

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This guy is such a troll:D

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有大佬愿意总结一下剧情吗

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这牙签也能he，我开始相信天国的胤盛家是个好结局了（bushi

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感覺不如...痴漢大叔，隔壁小孩，婦產科醫生帶勁

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With a dick that tiny, he was better off just fisting her shoulder deep to satisfy her. 😂

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替其他竿役黄毛不值，能不能来点其他黄毛的if线dlc

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The end of a great piece of NTS/NTR, really grabbed by the feelings near the end of the story !
What's your favorite chapter about the story all of you ? Mine is the blowjob chapter, nice mix of NTS/NTR and peak graphic design (bonus points the Hinako's PoV chapters)

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只能说希望后续多来点肉戏了，明说有第二部了

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其實這結局也不是不行，甚至其他些本子劇情這種結局也沒少出現過，只是沒這麼拖沓
大概是拖太久大家不爽了吧

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Now that we finally arrived at the main story ending here's a Review for the series:

This series has one of the BEST of not the best teasing sequences in an NTS tag. On par with Nt00 series 'something is wrong in the head' and sometimes(personally) even better. 9/10 in that.

Where this series fell short was the whole last Genki sex arc. While needed for Yuichi's succumbing to his dark desire character development the pacing and the mcs(and NnT) approach towards progressing that plot was not good and not near/on par with a top quality NTS story that this series had potential for and would've been an even bigger L if it went towards an NTR route ending.

No matter the route NTS or NTR Genki was not a good character + his yapping got old real fast resulting in making his inclusion in most sex scenes with Hinako a big meh even if we only consider his existence as a plot device to furthering the MC's development.
Genki Sex Arc Part 4 brought back a bit of the missing quality of the series BUT not enough, still would've prefered if Yuichi fall to his dark desire were handled better/differently. 5/10 for this arc.

Last two chapter gives us a decent conclusion despite the.
The overall score for this series: 7.8/10.

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陽菜子的纯爱把期待着ntr结局的我们的心给ntr了，这何尝不是一种ntr

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ネトラレの民，放下牛头海王的名号，从最简单的纯爱开始画起罢！

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103页写了下个月还有后续，日后这系列估计还有其他（她）角色的故事。

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Awww, that's sweet. Vanilla sex hits different after an arduous netorare tease.
He made it back from Mordor and now he finally nakadashi'd Hinako. Must have felt pretty good for Yuuichi.

Yeah, the teasing in this series was pretty great and how Hinako was unpredictable at times. It reminds me of the game 'Indecent Wife Hana', with pretty much the same borderline NTR teasing and doubting and the same mischievous and somewhat cunning heroine. Both gave me elevated heart rate from the tension, and that is a compliment. Not bad... not bad at all. And obviously, the sex arc was the weakest. It didn't give me that much tension cause its like you almost know what's coming and that's where it fell apart.

Anyways, it's still great overall. Needs more Hinako and other dudes. It's pretty hot how she exuded that aura to bend them to her will so bring more of her mischievous and cunning personality back too cause that's the shit.

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这作者真是拎不清大伙想看啥，非最后整这一出，有这时间精力不如多画点牛的画面

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反转了，女主g点在洞口！

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She said a few times that her pussy will take some time to get back in its previous shape. Does it mean that she won't sleep with Genki anymore? I really hate that ape, he's a horrible friend and is super annoying. It be a whole lot better if she slept with other people instead of just Genki. It would also make it clearer that she's doing this without real attachement for her sex partners. It would feel less like she's in a relationship with them,

Either way, it was a wholesome chapter. You can tell she's crazy for Yuuchi and that she really did all those things because she wants him to feel good.

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@Valmond82 Genki very much a loose cannon, can't fool him forever so it is better to cut him off in the long run and Hinako WILL cut him off no question if push comes to shove unless Yuichi says/feels otherwise e.g if Genki chooses to comply to the status quo as a mere dildo among other dildos in nts play for Yuichi with some ground rules from Hinako.

p.s after such intense ponding with Genki if Hinako still hasn't fallen there is no way she ever will. RELAX, unless the author themselves back steps from all the reassurance from the last chapter making a total fool of himself and his work highly doubt that would ever happen in the cannon story.

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So everything from the prologue to the after story was considered part 1? This isn't the end? 🙃

At least I know the hard times are over. Until they get to the inevitable pregnancy stuff. The ride continues.

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Can I have a timeline of how I should read this. I got lost around the 3rd part of the story. Thanks.

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真正的艺术家是根本不在乎观众想看什么的

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This is one of those series that is just mediocre. People comparing this to NT00 are delusional. Just compare the arc and sex scenes that went are like game CGs. It went for too long with no real pay off.

There's no character development and no consequences either. An NTR end is the only ending that works here, not vanilla. You could tell it was inspired by NT00 but the creator failed to execute that idea well. There's no way of Hinako coming back to the MC unless there is a part 2 where NTR happens because the MC is shit at sex unable to perform as his mind was forever conditioned to being a cuck.

The plot was handled poorly. Rather than going straight NTS, it would have been better if Hinako simply teased the MC about the possibility of her cheating on him making him imagine Hinako cheating on him like Xration's Mixed Real.

You then teased the readers and the MC through imagined sex scenes and teased in non sexual scenes then end it with Hinako leaving the MC for good without revealing anything and leaving the MC to indulge in his fantasies, that everytime he sees Hinako with a guy, he can only see her having sex with anyone but him. With MC being the reader's self insert, this ending will leave us like the MC, thinking whether Hinako actually had sex with anyone.

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反转了，其实旅馆那次阳菜子没吃药，和男主做是为了假装受男主的精，其实暗地里怀了刚田的孩子让男主在不知情的情况下接盘（）
哎，我好恶毒

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竟然是纯爱，呱，我不要看纯爱呀口牙

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@shakuganexa This would be a good ending for a different story. Rapidly changing Hinako's character into someone who'd leave him for sex with literally the worst partner out of the guys she's teased him with cannot be done in 5 chapters. This was most people's problem with the sex chapters when they took her cheating at face value. I know that NTR commonly uses the "innocent girl that would never actually cheat", but those books are like 22-70 pages and they need to get to the point quickly. This book is far too long for Hinako to transform in a couple chapters. On top of that, the story never established any reason for her to leave Yuichi other than Genki's dumb fetish. Yuichi did enjoy being cucked, but not being abandoned. By the story's own logic she only ever considered leaving him if she felt that he was hurt from it.

Even if I don't personally like some aspects of this story, it's always better for it to follow through in its ideas. Not abandoning that to suddenly shift into whatever I wanted.

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一开始画的不是挺好看的吗，怎么画风越来越奇怪了

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逼迫接吻前那7天没画 肯定有点东西哈哈哈哈

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one thing that NT00 and this guy has in common is they like to ruin the good shit by doubling down and milking until it gets stale. But at least both of them are decent and talented enough to do it on Original and tiny bit of story arc unlike vast majority of NTR brainrot.

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最后的几章有点仓促的感觉，本来看前半个故事以为会很长，但是过了温泉那章还是从哪里开始就开始一路推进了，后面的感觉都没啥意思了，看看图片就当看过了，前面的遇到不清楚的语句还得去用多个翻译看看到底啥意思。不知道是不是作者有新的点子还是发展到这里就不太会写了。

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After turning delusions into reality, this story has become totally meaningless. Chapter 2? Really?
There’s no tension anymore because she already did something she shouldn’t have. Nothing about this excites me.

No matter how many chapters he draws, We all know how it ends—she ends up with another man's child.
It’s not interesting anymore because I can already see how it ends. I’m out, I envy you if this story still gets you excited. enjoy the ending, everyone.

NT00 is the same; they’re just milking the story. Know when to wrap it up. But I get it, money talks.
They’re talented, So They can bring the same quality to another series. Come on, Don't play it safe—take the risk.

I don’t underestimate this or NT00’s series, since I thoroughly enjoyed them. But they’re starting to lose their spark. You know, it is what it is.
However, most people would agree that the previous art style for both was better.

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Can anyone explain to me about this part2 written by author pls? Is there going to be part 2?

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绿帽癖这个xp本身就够小众的了，在现实更是不可能进行尝试的一类，于是只能看本子来寻找既能满足xp又不会抛弃自己的女主。但是即使是本子，绿帽xp也很多以被牛走做普遍结局，如果是这样的话，为什么要特地选择绿帽癖男主作苦主呢，选择正常人男主，然后女主被黄毛牛走，对于代入黄毛的读者不是更有征服感吗？而且绿帽本中对绿帽情节的偏重也在表明其受众不同于普通的ntr受众不是吗。
所以我很疑惑，绿帽本的作者究竟是为了给女主恶堕作正当化处理，是满足喜欢牛走有绿帽癖男主的伴侣的受众，是为了让自己的作品看起来符合现实，又或是只单纯为了恶心绿帽癖读者才选择了牛走女主作为作品的结局。
对于绿帽癖受众来说，过程如何不重要，只要女主最后选择了男主，无论多么抽象，都是比被牛走结局要强的，因为只有在虚构的作品里才可能满足这些在现实永远不可能尝试的xp。
（一个翻遍绿帽作品的读者的无能狂怒）

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让牛牛精灵把男主变大我都能接受

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Which "genius" tagged that chapter as "netorare"? XD

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这个系列还会继续下去，女主已经体验过了第二根肉棒，男主的阈值也更高了，两个人想要满足自己的畸形欲望，只能寻找更刺激的玩法了，很期待今后的发展，和他们的结局

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不知所谓

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有没有这么一种可能，纯爱才是假结局虚晃一枪，现在跟男主才是演技，后面跟回黄毛告诉男主这都是黄毛要我这么做的

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