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"How rough can the translation be?"

"My name is Cultivation and this is my friend, Farming"

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"Cultivation"
"Farming"
This isn't an idle game bruh

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That must have been Skynet's work!

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those dialogues xD

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The protagonist's name in the first page was translated using a Chinese pronunciation(not onyomi, but actual Chinese language) so what kind of MTL did you use here. This is actually special in how fucked up it is.

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What a beautiful duwang.

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The spirit of Shinzo Abe approves

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The raws have more coherent English.

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Actually looking through again: there really was no proofreading huh? I joked about the names because I skipped to the last page, but like @Azure_Eidolon says, the name on the first page is a Chinese name... but even more concerning is the jump from page 4 and 5. 4 is clear enough, it introduces the main 3 students and talks about Kurumi who is the main girl of this work... only to then call Yumiyaya Miku by the name of "Future" on page 5, and Zero-Chan Riri as just "Li".

I get that names could get translated because of symbolism and such (if a character named "Akira" was translated as "Bright" it would make sense translated but not as an English name), but the fact that literally between 2 characters being introduced on one page and being described on the second they have different names? It's like someone ran each page through a translator, saved the file, then got amnesia of the previous pages before repeating to the end.

*Edit: it also is interesting that on the later pages it has a website link for other comics, but that same link isn't on the first pages. Is this multiple translations stitched together?

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JP > CN > MTL > EN, pfff hahaha. Dude's name is Ootsudzu Kousaku. Fucking "Daizhin Jinzeng" LOL.
Should also mention the girls' names. Kurumi(胡桃)zawa(沢) Kurumi-zawa Kurumi, Mi(御)kuru(ri)((来))ya(屋) Mi-kuri-ya Miku, Rei(零)Gendou(間堂) Reigendou Rei. Completely missed that.
Seeing as there's no furigana for the names, you have to use some knowhow for how each kanji can be read. It's a bitch, but it's how I know for sure you didn't translate shit.

Last edited on 14 September 2024, 00:26.

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@P-dog btw my name is my profession too

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