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Posted on 17 September 2024, 19:35 by: Tess Verres
Score +40
Constructive criticism: I'd recommend looking into getting a proofreader for your text. It's readable and understandable, but a bit jarring. That would help with the quality of it in my opinion. The art isn't bad at all as far as I can tell, but that's subjective. Otherwise, decent upload.
Also, given the ending, is this complete, to be continued in another chapter? It's left hanging here with no indication of it being the end, or if it's going to continue.