Quick escalation is one thing, but this is so fast it feels like pages are missing.
Base +6, Ferusxeon +1
Posted on 24 September 2024, 12:46 by: IronHide77777
Score +1
I agree, way too fast an escalation. Short skits like this are usually 6 or 12 pages long. I'm going to have to drop a star for bad transitioning. Good art and basic story is there, just needs a little tweaking.