A lot of Netorare has the problem of no buildup to the girls giving in or showing guilt, so it just becomes cheating by going from hanging out to sex without reason. your art is improving just your stories need more build up to flesh them out.
@7thguardian It isn't really about the buildup with this one, it sorta took a turn in the early pages (originally was going a completely different direction and not NTR at all) started to get bored with the idea of just a simple little comic about a near miss, so I decided to try something out of my wheelhouse. Soon as I opened up to the idea I found a ton of momentum (I did all those pages in just over a week while still doing my normal content as well) I've got about 100 pages of ideas thought up and it is more about this unit sorta finding a balance and her trying to get pregnant, as it is set in the same universe as Zoe with difficulty getting pregnant and a culture very intent on getting pregnant. thanks for the comment, and I hope you keep an eye out for where this comic goes, I will be updating frequently on my site and here I'll add the rest of the first chapter once it is done in a couple weeks/months
I'll be following, but like the other guy I think NTR works better with both with girl getting corrupted and with original boyfriend finding out. At least if the story has her being stolen away. This seems to be going the more cuckold route where they stay together because the boyfriend enjoys watching, and there is no hard feelings about her being with other guys.