If I could offer one criticism, some mention of the passing days, or a sense of how long it is between pages woudl help steady the plot. Otherwise it feels a bit like this is happening really fast for such dramatic corruptions
very awesome would have thoguth the married could would ahve hooked her up to a milking machine in store milking her 8 hours a day, whil on all fours customers spit roast her cumming in her mouth and arse non stop and then when she gets home she would be the married couples house slave milk orgasm swallow cum repeat