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[Moon] Adopting a Cow (complete)

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Posted:2024-10-22 00:50
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Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:109.3 MiB
Length:44 pages
Favorited:746 times
Rating:
160
Average: 4.57

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Posted on 22 October 2024, 00:50 by:   Innis1071    PM
Uploader Comment
Please support the original artist:
https://www.patreon.com/Moon631
https://x.com/happy_moon_owo

While I was doing my daily tag search, I stumbled upon this gallery which tickled my fancy, but needed some TLC, which I gave. This is my revision and there were quite a few changes made. Whether this would be considered a rewrite, I'll leave up to you fine gents.

The following major changes were made:
1. The MC's name was changed from "sir" to "Master" given that he bought her, not to mention it sounds like she's talking to a stranger.
2. The sales sticker on her left leg on page 1 was re-done.
3. The author kept flipflopping on animal terms throughout the book, so I did away with the non-terminology and went all in.
4. Typeset on all pages were done to a font size of 65 or less to better fill the majority of empty space. (Page 13 is the exception with the last bubble)
5. Typeset is now fully westernized (Zero crossbars "I" except for pronouns, italics for mc narration boxes, etc.)
6. Question marks, periods and exclamation points were toned down a bit.
7. Page 26 had it's bubbles rebuilt to add the missing pins (looked odd seeing that page alone with them missing, also helped establishing who's talking)
8. One character narration box was added to page 36 to better establish that the first calf/child was born, allowing better sequencing going forward.
9. All pages were lightly dusted to reduce the compression artifacts.
10. Pages 5, 6, 7, and 8 had their bubbles/boxes rebuilt to add the missing strokes.
11. Page 21 was not included as it was a duplicate from the artists Patreon page.
12. Last but not least, nearly all dialogue was re-done to fix the poor grammar. The text was also edited for a more natural reading experience.

Do let me know if any other changes should be made.

If you like what you see then please support my bounties.
Posted on 22 October 2024, 01:28 by:   FROGuud    PM
Score +13
虽然但是,牛一胎也只有一个啊,这一胎多个不是猪就是狗或者猫啊
Posted on 22 October 2024, 03:04 by:   Thragg12345    PM
Score +201
I feel like this comic is trying to be wholesome, but the dialogue makes it come off as kind of creepy.
Posted on 22 October 2024, 04:50 by:   ThreeFingerG    PM
Score -100
Could of had something great on my hands if it wasn't shit hyperpreg
Posted on 22 October 2024, 06:35 by:   Immortalitis    PM
Score +397
Oh sure. When HE fucks a cow, it's cute. When I fuck a cow, they ask me to get the fuck out of the County Fair.
Posted on 22 October 2024, 07:42 by:   Anonynmous    PM
Score -90
This is all kinds of messed up
Posted on 05 November 2024, 03:05 by:   AridGalaxy    PM
Score +24
I need more content like this one. If someone has any recomendation, please let me know.
Posted on 05 November 2024, 17:46 by:   sleepyhead    PM
Score +19
Whoa. I love this.

More please!
Posted on 12 November 2024, 12:44 by:   Zoro the Gallade    PM
Score +11
She's cute and the story is vanilla. All good.

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