I think you need to tone down on the bright background. I'm currently looking at the previews and I can't tell head or tail what happening. I understand you trying to go for color matching here but too much of the background detract from the meat of art. The color should be darker to highlight the characters, less detail so people can have a easier time processing the pic. And by god if you want to have multiple angles group the start to finish into 1 group or a page number next to each other. Then start from a new angel start to finish. For example: page 40 > 44 > 47.

The smug face of the male face shouldn't be front and center this much, you want your male to be faceless so the viewer can insert themselves in. If you can just move his head behind her headdress and minimize the face it could be make a good piece.

The reuse of content is gonna be reason why you have so low rating from page 49-End you could delete cause it add nothing beside bad taste to viewers. When viewers see you reusing content that there's not really that much changes they see it as copy paste.

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