Based off of the 16 pages we currently have, I say this is a solid 3. Plot-wise it works fine but I can tell someone spent a decent amount of time thinking certain parts out, average pokemon fanboy shit. The art isn't perfect but it definitely oozes charm and personality, regardless of the issues I see with the characters when they're naked on page 13. Also the bottom left panel of page 11 is clearly different somehow, I think its just been further rendered to give off the intended effect but it still sticks out. If it wasn't incest and there were less mentions of Hilda being her "baby" then this would be a 4, good job cause I kept reading despite lacking an incest fetish.
If you're curious in what the unobscured rambling text on page 10 is to better contextualize page 11, the artist posted it over on Twitter: https://nitter.poast.org/DiabolusSex/status/1542566640407158784 ❝It's you, Hilda! You're the one making me so horny! I can't stop thinking about you and your cock! I just need it inside me! I know I shouldn't since you're my daughter, but I can't help it! You're too Arceus-damn sexy! Running around in that tiny shirt and those tight shorts...I don't know how anyone can control themselves around you! Please, baby...I need to fuck you! I NEED your cum! FILL ME WITH YOUR SEED! I DON'T CARE ANYMORE! JUST FUCK ME, PLEASE! GIVE ME ANOTHER BABY! I NEED TO BREED WITH YOU HILDA!! I...I...❞