This is a proper translation of the second part of "Is my mother trying to seduce me?" by Maccha Neji.

Part 1
Original: /g/2347727/373b6256f3/
English: /g/2519247/dd6cf35acc/

Part 2
Original: /g/2742809/1e487589cb/
English: You're here

Like I said in the TL note, it's my first time ever doing this work, so please cut me some slack lol.
At least, it was an interesting way to learn, I now have a new found respect for every H translator!

Edit:
Page 46: forgot to add "The End" text
Page 50: Orignal → Original
Edit 2:
Page 17: Could'nt → Couldn't x2

Good work! thanks for the translation!

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Thank you! means a lot from someone who's also translating!

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finally in english!

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She's taking your son? Idk, looks like he's taking her.

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Bro, the first part is isn't properly translated at all, It has the rough TL and also copying this whole sale from a comment. It is commendable that you want to give this a proper TL and rescue it from the MTL trashpile though.

Take note that the text under this one applies to part one of this series.

>" 006
OG: やめてっ
TL: Haa!
ED: this isn't a moan

007
OG: おっ
TL: Takahiro...
ED: this is a moan

008
OG: 高広っ
TL: Ha
ED: this isn't a moan

OG: んん / んんん
TL: Shlop / Shlop
ED: this isn't sfx

009
OG: お願いやめてっ
TL: Ha
ED: this isn't a moan

011
OG: おおうっ
TL: Splurrrt
ED: this isn't sfx

012
OG: オナニーしてぬるぬるに汚したパンティを脱衣カゴに入れたり
TL: And after masturbating he will leave my dirty and wet panties in the basket
ED: she's not talking about her son

OG: 自ら息子のオカズになるような素振りをしていきました
TL: I began to tempt my son and pretended as if nothing was wrong...
ED: 2nd half is made up

014
OG: 夢で見たように息子に抱かれたい…
TL: I want to be held by my son like in my dream...
ED: held?

OG: 本当に一線を越える勇気が出なかったので / 妄想の中で楽しんでいたのですが
TL: I don't know if I have the courage to cross that line... / But I'm having fun with my delusions...
ED: she absolutely knows, she's enjoying her delusions because she doesn't

OG: だめよこんなっ
TL: Haa
ED: this isn't a moan

018
OG: お母さんのパンツがすっごく汚れてたり / やたらとパンツ見せてきたり
TL: Leaving your dirty laundry in plain sight... / You were showing me your panties on purpose, weren't you?
ED: he's just talking about how dirty her panties have been and then how carelessly she's been flashing him (as part of a list of things related to the next panel). you turned one list item into a separate clause (like pg 012)

024
OG: 私の中で再び解き放たれた熱い精子が膣内を満たしていき
TL: My son's hot semen is filling my pussy...
ED: missing detail, it's being released in her again (directly related to pg 21 and 22)

033
OG: 淡白な夫とは経験してないプレイを楽しんでる自分もいて…
TL: I started to enjoy these sexual games that I had never experienced with my husband...
ED: missing detail describing her husband

036
OG: すごいきもちいいっ
TL: Anhh...harder!
ED: she's not asking him for anything here

037
OG: コラ…
TL: Haaa
ED: this isn't a moan

i didn't really include them here but the majority of the handwritten bubbles seem to be made up?"

Making shit up is not translating.

Last edited on 12 November 2024, 15:16.

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Buddy, part one was done by a completely different person. Why would you post notes for that translation on the second part when it's not even the same person? How are they supposed to fix it?

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Bro thought he was cool by copy pasta a fix translate.

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It's so good I need a part 3 of this.

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