I was commissioned to translate this.

Source:
https://x.com/omotti_5/status/1799754241747325062

Comments and Critiques on translation and/or typesetting is always appreciated.

Can't speak about the translation, but the typesetting isn't as good as your previous uploads. Dunno why there is so much text spilling over the bubbles here (I guess the low res?).

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@moodyclaus

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, these are part of a skeb commission, and then a third person commissioned me to translate this because they liked it.
The files I think were downloaded from twitter, but even on skeb I can't find higher res version.

Do you think making the text smaller would have made it look better?
I was a little bit concerned that if the text was any smaller, than it would be difficult to read.

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