First version here: /g/1774180/9025807807/

Edit: Seems like there's more pages after "THE END".

Artist Pages:
https://www.patreon.com/Mr5star
https://twitter.com/MR5TAR
https://twitter.com/Misuta5star
https://www.deviantart.com/mr5star
https://misuta5star.tumblr.com/
https://mr5star.newgrounds.com/
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/16291299

Granted i didnt read the first one but i have no fucking clue what's happening in this

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I did read the first one and was looking forward to this, still no idea. Also, the blue dog-cat thing is an abomination when it comes to character design. Like JFC even by furry standards, that thing is just an amalgamation of poor choices.

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This has to have been one of the hardest to follow comics I've ever read

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I really liked the original comic but this one is just very hard to follow. I am very disappointed.

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Having read the first part, I really wanted a follow-up to see those boys get trained, but I'm mixed on this. More than half of it is essentially a recap of the first part and what remains is pretty lacking. Here's hoping it picks up.

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honestly it feels like he doesnt want to just commit to drawing the sex. it's not funny enough for the comedy to be the selling point but there's enough attempts at comedy that it really cuts into those plump cheeks getting clapped.

add to that a desire to "for some reason" focus on a narrative that is just an independant story like the other storylines and it just leaves people waiting for the good part

@archmancer8

i dunno... i like blue bitch, particularly when he's taking pipe but it often takes a while to get there

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. I see images, but I cant
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