[The Amiter Secret]
After being discovered, Hunter and Vee will have to find a way to keep their friend Amity from sharing their secret to others, so they will do whatever it takes to prevent that from happening.

This comic will have 32 pages, I hope you like it!

You can support this project here:
https://www.patreon.com/RuddyRzaq

Very promising, let see how it develops. Really like the thicc art style.

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I wouldn't say Vee's point is fair.
Amity is complaining that Vee shapeshifted into her for having sex, calling it indecent. Vee counter-argues that Amity and Luz do the same when they cosplay as the characters in Luz's fantasy novels.
It's a completely different breach of privacy, especially given how accurate Vee's shapeshifting is, and the fact that they live together. For example, if I cosplay as, I don't know, Harry Potter, he's never going to find out, mainly because it's a fictional character that doesn't exist, so what I do with his image doesn't matter or affects him. But if I shapeshfit into a carbon copy of my roommate, to bang my other roommate (who has the hots for her), then it's a clear breach of privacy.

Now of course, while it's indecent, it's not like Vee was just flaunting Amity's privates in the street. They were in private minding their own business, so while Amity has reasons to be upset, she should not think they had any ill intent behind it.

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It's such a shame, so much effort, so much work, and such beautiful art wasted in a NTR story. What could have been one of the greatest Amity and Luz comics turned out to be just another run-of-the-mill NTR comic, c'est la vie.

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>wasted in a NTR story
Y’all gotta start coming up with more original excuse to bitch about comics you can just as easily ignore. Whatever round table of asinine excuses gave you that gem is probably the kind of self-hating individual that doesn’t even bother to hit something as easy as Block or blacklist tags.

Anywho, this looks good. More NTR with The Owl House would be nice (especially with Lumity at the center of it 😈😈)

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Heh. Look at 11 (page 9) paraphrasing the comments pointing out how nonsensical Vee's point is. These comments were in January, the page was done in February 7th. When the writer is so bad he needs to do a 180º after reading the comments, and instead of coming up with a reason for why Vee said all that before, he just mirrors the comments.

Ruddy, your art is fine. Maybe the boobs are a bit too sagged in this second part compared to the first one, but overall it's fine. But, if you want to write a serious story like this, you need an actual writer, not some dude that translates English into his native language. An average high schooler can translate English into his native language; this doesn't mean they can write a story.

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mythreebeard, shut up.

its porn. No one cares as long as dicks go into places.

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I was gonna agree with Harmony, but then she went and said something fr*nch.

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I don't know why Mochita's comment was downvoted so much, made me laugh so hard.

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It's funny seeing the quality of art devolve with each page because Ruddy wasted too much time on what ultimately will be pointless dialogue instead of action, prompting his team to leave and now it just looks like scribblies compared to intiial pages.
20 pages for lil suckie is certainly a good use of work.

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