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I like abs

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Your best one yet!

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It was mid to good for the second 100 pages (100 to 200 nice ending of that whole section with the footjob), but I'm kinda bored of the "will she/won't she" thing.

We are currently on 400+ pages of nothing... basically just long talks some masturbation, the "calentadas de pija al pedo" and one footjob.

P.D. don't get me wrong I like her abs and the "corruption/addiction", woman being a woman, desiring to be an object of lust despite any façade.... but it's getting repetitive and really really long

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@peg92
I love abs

@slaveonline21
Thanks mate, apreciate it!

@hammerjarl
Hello mate, first of all, thank you for your criticism. I'm deeply saddened that this comic isn't turning out as you like, and I just want to say that I get where your criticism comes from and I will try to improve in the future.

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more updates and more footjobs plllllllls

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omg it’d be so hot if she decided 2 lez out with Bella lol

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Aw man, I liked the curly hair. Oh well, maybe this look will grow on me.

Also, just wanted to say, I appreciate the slow-burn pace! Too many of similar works go from 0 to 100, so having the changes be noticably gradual is great.

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Not a fan of the new hair style.

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Hi Dude, I am Sicilian, if you want help with names and anything else...

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谢谢兄弟，非常感谢！

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I wonder if she'll turn into an actual succubus.

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600 hundred pages and shes only just given a blowjob, this was interesting at first but you dragged it out too far, now its just annoying.

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Loving the slow burn of this one. Never quite understood people who want to see someone go from a nun to a whore in 60 seconds - the whole point is that there's a huge gap between the two that needs to be bridged slowly. If it were easy to corrupt someone so pure, it wouldn't be interesting to do so.

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Hello,

I like your story of course, and the fact that you take your time to develop a structured story... Of course I'd prefer to immediately get the five thousand pages story, but well it is how it is, so please, keep continue on your own pace, a good story isn't created in one night :-)

Oh, I almost forgot: thank you !!!

PS:
- Why is the picture III-082 censored ? (the only one)
- I don't understand: what happened from the picture IV-041 ???

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Very awesome story
cant wait for this to go deeper and darker (pun intended)

i would love to see where Catalina/Ruby's/Mias "plan" is and where it is meant to take Priestess

i would love to see Bella to get her claws into the priestess, corrupting her and making her at least bisexual,

maybe Bella could get a hold of the priestess for an ectended period of time, say for a whole weekend

from firday afternoon till monday morning she uses the wine & cigarettes & many other things to corrupt priestess to get her strapped to a bondage horse.
priestesses arms bound behind her back in a reverse prayer.

laying down on the horse, legs kept separate and locked and a fucking machine in her pussy &/or pussy & arse edging her over and over while Bella, laying on her back, grinds her massive hucow pussy and massivve pussy lips all over preistesses face making priestess service her hucow-mommy-mistress.
milking pumps attached to both of priestesses nupples as well as Bellas hucow breasts pump stronger and stronger over the many many many hours of Bellas torturous pleasure proramming over priestess

Bella using the controls of the fucking machine to edge the priestess over and over, while the headphones on priestesses ears gives her suggestions that not only does she love to serve any and all cocks but she loves to eat any and all pussy and drink male and female cum, and, that she wants to produce milk for her mistress bella.

a hose connecting to priestesss arse giving ename feed &/OR connected to nasogastric tube would continnously feed priestess a multisuppliment of Bella and Doctor Enzo's making. Making priestess more and more cock & pussy addicted, cum addicted, smoke & drink addicted, but also full of supplements to make priestesses arse, breasts, hips, nipples, pussy, and clit grow bigger, fatter, softer, more sensitive, and producing milk that contains both the substances of botht eh wine and cigarettes, making the priestess into a literal cash cow

i would have thought that Alesso would ahve wanted to not disturb her and leave her under the desk to keep sucking no matter what, if the meeting were going, meetings stopped, or the end of the world was here :D lol

a cool touch would be if Alesso had some buttons and levers installed for hte next meeting.
1 button pulls the wrist restraints up behind her back to lock her wrists together in a reverse prayer position attahced to her collar

another button pushes up a controllable vibrator into her pussy, and another button one into her arse, giving hi total control of the legnth and girth and size of the dildo going intoher arse and pussy, as well as the speed of penetration and speed and intensity of vibration

another button locks on two miking pumps on her breasts to either pump continuosuly for the 6-12 hours of meetings, or on time delays such as 1 minute on 1 minute off or 15 minutes out of every hour. and the intensity of how much and how strongly the milkers suck and pump

maybe an injection to produce milk? (or should Bella be in charge of making priestess produce milk?

having her continusouly suck for 6-12 hours, with no break, and continnual pumping of nipples and pussy frying her brain from eithre edged or continnual pleasure, potentially making ehr addicted to alesso and/or addicted to sucking and/or so addiected to wishing to serve Alesso she will willing do it anywhere anytime for free?

also a button to position a dish to capture any and all pussy juices produced to be used in creating a stronger female aprodesiac substance for Alesso to use and sell

hmmmm, question, what would happen if priestess was also hooked up to recieve an aphrodesiac wine enema, and/or ename and a continnuous nasal ventillation smoke inhaler while sucking cock?

Last edited on 30 September 2024, 11:12.

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nearly 700 pages and she is still a virgin, how borin do you want to make this,.

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Still not a fan of the straight hair bimbo look. Bring the curls back!

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Sammyid - ther are many types of virgins, she has lost multiple virginities.
but, this is a slow boil story and if you actually stop and imagine what she has gone through and the effects its already a masive mind fuck.
this has the posibility to be a massive grat long story.....
ALesso, milky, the club, the mistresses, there are many people who are all gunning for Priestess and her mind to be fucked and melted into......

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Every chapter, she looks worse.

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I like the story, and the font used for her sluuty mind is very difficult to read. Please make it easier to read.

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Gaggonite -
dude... she sucked some guys off.. in 700 pages, no one cares anyone more, I don't even come back to this anymore to check the story, just the comments, I find it funny. this is a partreon trap and nothing else.

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@sammyid I refrain from commenting because I think everyone deserves an opinion, but I must say that calling me a Patreon trap is truly just harmful and incorrect.

You can dislike this or just watch for the comments because they are funny, but calling me a Patreon trap? C'mon, man. I work every single week on this. I have been releasing 15+ pages each week, and my patrons only have 2 weeks of paid content. I’m not asking you to like my stuff; I’m just asking you to consider this fact and at least respect my work or simply ignore it.

I reiterate: every single week, for the past 40+ weeks, I have uploaded for free here. Honestly, I don’t mind if people don’t like my content. I don’t mind being told it’s too slow. I don’t mind people laughing and saying it lacks substance, but calling me dishonest or a Patreon trap genuinely makes me sad. :(

Tbh, I’m just commenting to defend myself a little regarding your comment because there is no other way, and I won’t continue any further discussion here. You can always come to Discord and talk with me... Who knows? You started reading this for some reason, right? So I guess you found something, no matter how small, that you liked, and I hope to create more of that for you in the future. :)

Also, since I needed to say this, I might as well say something to everyone else: thanks for the criticism—good or bad. I appreciate it and will try to improve as best I can in the future. :)

@gumby42: Updated the font, mate. I hope this one is easier to read!

@Slifer83: Thanks, mate. I hope not to butcher too much of your culture. :)

@Gaggonite: I don’t like to answer comments here because this platform’s comment system is kind of weak. I just want to say that I read your comments too. Thank you for the comments and suggestions. I probably won’t implement them because I already have the story flow written for this one, but for future comics, I understand that you like the 'girl inside machine corruption' aesthetic. Without spoiling too much, I have prepared a corruption-type machine, and I will use it in the next story. :)

@Pillarman Wammu: Without spoiling too much, you will see her with curly hair once again!

Last edited on 06 November 2024, 22:04.

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@DudeWithAPassion C'mon dude, don't take "patreon trap" thing personal or that general. You know what's meant, it's your hundreds of pages of nothing happening style. I wouldn't call you that since as you said you are posting for free here, so people can check out your work before becoming a sub. But you gotta agree that your style is similar to actual traps.

And remember that almost all people who think the same leave without any comments obviously, so you are with roughly only positive feedback, on all platforms.

Personally I would just skip way ahead if I don't like that much slow burn, and I don't, problem solved.

What I like the most in your work so far is just casually being in public in hot outfits, you should definitely increase the dosage. As a recommendation I think animals would be fitting for a nun, and since they don't talk it would be very easy to add anywhere without unnecessary change in the story. Plus it seems like there's not enough thanking here, thanks for free stuff.

Last edited on 02 December 2024, 02:32.

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i would love to see her addited at birthing

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When can she get rid of the freckles?

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Excellent story, thank you

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I want to start by saying that I greatly appreciate the work you have done, which combines a compelling story with equally impressive visuals. I would like to contribute to your work by pointing out a few linguistic imperfections I noticed, as an Italian speaker. Some names seem to derive from Spanish or are otherwise not realistic in the Italian context. Here are my suggested corrections, hoping I haven’t overlooked anything:

Dante: This is an Italian name, but it is not typical in Sicily. For instance, there are currently only 300 people with this name in the region, out of a population of nearly 10 million.
Caterina: It should be Caterina, not "Catarina".
Alessio: In Italian, the correct form is Alessio, not "Alesso".
Paolo: It should be Paolo, not "Pablo".
Carlos: This is correct, as it refers to a Puerto Rican character.
I hope these suggestions will help you further improve your project. Congratulations again on your excellent work!

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@3dkxfan Hey, thanks for the great feedback and for pointing out my mistakes! I will change the names to fit more appropriately, but here's the thing: if I change the names, I’ll have to go through the whole comic and update them everywhere, which takes quite a lot of time. I will do it—maybe not in the following weeks, but once I finish this chapter, I’ll look into it! :) Thanks again for pointing out the mistakes!

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