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The only one with braincells was Mieko and nobody heard her at all.

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Finally a really great very hot unique story. I cant wait to see how it all comes out.

this author has not only inspiration but courage! well done!!

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Last edited on 26 December 2024, 11:29.

Base +49, darkwing42 +53, l3ean +6, AdurnaNagra +6, ToaKraka +7, Celibate_Wanker +14, derpsonanius +7

Is this machine translated? Did no one bother reading/proof-reading this? There's literally grammatical errors and typos already on page 5 and 6. "...Is in our EMPLOY(ee) as a sex save"?! "...By embracing this SELFSAME Ainalinde"?! Come on man, I appreciate the majority of the typography being done but this is coming from a company (2d-market.com)?

Base +6, mrwayne -17, DaiyaO -12, Black-lights -15, brightnp24 -6

@Lectern

https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/employ#Noun

noun: employ

the state or fact of being employed for wages or a salary.
"I started work in the employ of a grocer and wine merchant"
archaic
employment.
"her place of employ"
"we are in the employ of the Order, not of it"

https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/selfsame#Adjective

self·same
/ˈselfˌsām/
adjective
adjective: selfsame; adjective: self-same

exactly the same.
"he was standing in the selfsame spot you're filling now"

perhaps the translator, seeing the setting was 1929 in that section of the book, decided to use some out-of-fashion terminology? it would behoove you to know English before you try and criticize creative writing.

https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/behoove#Verb

it would also behoove you to not include typos in your own attempt at criticism - slave is not, in fact, written as "save" on page 5.
i hope this free vocab lesson was useful to you!

Base +15, mrwayne +17, quivi +6, melfice999 +6, Black-lights +15, brightnp24 +6

Hey I appreciate the lesson honestly, that was entirely my misunderstanding and that definitely makes sense regarding the time period with 1929. That was definitely on me, cheers.

Base +6, quivi +6, pilly nutty +9, brightnp24 +6

I don't get it. What's the elf planning to do? Ruin the family by dividing the estate up too much?

Base +6, Zeke154 +7

Damn Lectem restoring my faith in internet denizens. Fuck yeah man. ALso Daruna thanks for gathering the information and presenting it.

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