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Tracing MelkorMancin

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Did you have any concept for this story whatsoever? First the cover implies slutty Hinata and Tsunade shotaconing Boruto, which sounds amazing. Then it starts with flashforward to adult Boruto and Himawari engaged in good old incest, which is perfectly fine, maybe building up to a harem. But then you sideline Boruto and introduce the generic "manipulative son's friend", which, if you ask me, is pretty meh in itself, and, with the expectations already built for incest, borders on ntr. Just where is this going and who is your target audience?

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封面怎么一股jo味

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This little brat has no idea who he's messing with. So when is Hinata gonna turn the tables?

Just to remember, Hinata is still a crazy strong Byakugan user and has her fighting abilities.
You really telling me she's become desperate housewife with no more ninja skills?...
That's kinda Sexist.

Last edited on 27 October 2024, 23:58.

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I doubt she will, it's seems like it's just going to become some generic ntr trash.

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Lol the cover image is a tracing of a brazzers thumbnail

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This is trash

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NTR and cucking took over the hentai genre’ so hard I remember when it was barely NTR but now that’s everything I see it’s getting old and repetitive

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That should have been Boruto in the end taking care of Hinata's needs just like he was doing with his baby sister prior.

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garbage shit

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Cannot understand people critiquing free porn... give the dude a break. I liked it. Yeah the MelkorMancin influence is obvious... so what? Everyone's style starts someplace. And critiquing the plot?? Give me a break

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Feel like they'd be better off separating the boruto/himawari/hinata stuff from the cuck shit and just make it it's own story. Already have kid boruto for the cuck shit and older boruto for the incest stuff anyway.

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thanks for sharing

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