the "other" kind of sibling rivalry

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Errr... I feel like there's a discrepancy in the story, like we missed a timeskip. She's flat as a board in the first two pages, then the last panel on the third page she's got a decent C-cup? And they get taller as the pages go on. Weird.

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@Spengbab, I thought the exact same thing while translating and was tempted to do a <where are they> meme in the afterpages, but I guess this was only a day later and she really hid them well before.

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The third panel in the second page where we see some tree branches is the "temporal warp". Not obvious at all. Maybe a few words inside like « Few years later... » could solve this issue.

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@menospeaknihongo it's just a timeskip happening like Nethan said above me. Fabulous work though!

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This was very hot, i wish there was a sequel with them as a horny couple, those are the best

What was those extra edited pages at the end? usually translators put a single one there but there were 3...ohh well

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