Clearly inspired by the Eagles song. Respectful feedback and comments always welcomed.

Art feels like rough MS paint coloring over photos of people but I think this has MUCH more character nowadays than the now common AI slop. The somewhat "cartoonyness" has a certain charm.

You also have clear progress in quality since earlier work and I look forward to further progression as a TG artist.

Only real criticism I have are pages 14-16 could of been different poses as the three in a row feel unnatural. Though your re-use of settings and placement blocking otherwise was very thematic as a comic and something nice to see so quickly in an artist.

I also think you could of been a bit more explicit (shown a few more pages of raw sex, perhaps ending on full frontal penetration), though that is personal preference between smut vs eroticism, however it was a nice (mostly) original self contained plot that did not drag on.

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Thanks for the feedback Immortalimmoral. The style is inspired by Archer: a very basic, 2 or 3 tone coloring. Though clearly their artists (or likely computers today) are much better. I agree with the pages 14-16 comment. I made this a while ago and even briefly thought about editing that part cause it does feel lazy. I was trying to go with the clear changes in, well everything about the character, in that sequence. Also, this was originally made for DA hence nothing explicit. Thanks for the comment! Much appreciated!

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