I've seen translations of this story in various languages and they all have many differences, so I gave it a shot.

The last page is an earlier, alernate version of the first.
It's a bit more accurate but I felt it lacked character. Feel free to disagree.

>but I managed to I hold back my feelings...
Dang it, how did I not notice that before??

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In other words you butchered the translation with google translate and decisively ensured that a proper translation will never be created? This is 2024. Anyone can run shit through image to image software and get a similarly butchered translation. Why do people do this???

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@TheGoodGiggle
How does this stop anyone? There was already another English version and that didn't stop me. There are various duplicates of many other doujins too, each with its own flavor.

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Well if it's old enough and there is no interest... this one is from 2021 and I don't think there are translators willing to go back and do this one sadly, MTL translation are more toxic if they are for recent works like before the doujin has two years in publication, most translators will see it translated on ehentai and think it's done than see it's a MTL one, this happened a few times.

It's a little disappointing but I get why you did this, just wish it was more clear it's MTL with the title and description.

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