Rewrite and rearrangement of Sahara Wataru's doujinshi, Inniku Koushin, originally published on the 31st of December 2010.
This rewrite uses DesuDesu's translation as well as the Chinese, Japanese and French versions. Adjustments to the images were done using Paint.

Edit 1: minor language fixes.
Edit 2: improved font consistency.
Edit 3: tweaks to IMAGE022.
Edit 4: improved vocabulary consistency.
Edit 5: improved font coherency within pages.
Edit 6: fixed formatting oversights.
Edit 7: ellipsis points on last panel of IMAGE010 have been pushed 5 pixels to the left. Happy New Year.

>[Rewrite]
oh no
>"cum dumpster"
oh thank god, phew

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I will be honest here. though I love the artist style, and always have... this has always been among my least favorite of his work, for one reason. Sasuke. I hate his character with a passion, and anything that has him as the male lead, whether fanfiction or hentai? I cannot stand. I just cant.

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^@noctusdark : Honestly, I don't much like Sasuke either. However, I find seeing Sakura being humiliated fairly enjoyable, BUT having it done by some random no-name just feels wrong. And Naruto is too much a good guy still. So there you have it, that's the niche Sasuke occupies for me...

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@noctusdark He's still better than Naruto. I can't stand him and it's even worse that he's the MC. Bleh.

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I appreciate that Sakura's not getting fucked by Naruto for a change but Sasuke sucks.

This doujin is better: /g/708258/d07e5133f5/

Sakura forcefully gets fucked by someone other than Naruto (well technically Menma is still Naruto lol).

Last edited on 22 August 2024, 19:12.

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^@greengrasstree : I definitely get what you're saying, but sadly that one never felt *mean enough* to cut it in the "abuse department" for me.

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Personally, unless the girl has a very unlikable personality, I'm not really a fan of hentai depicting violent rape or abuse. I like how in the Menma doujin, Sakura ended up enjoying the sex, whereas she never enjoys doing it with Sasuke here. I also like how she had a tougher attitude in the Menma doujin. The way she's crying in misery here makes this doujin too depressing. Not that I can't enjoy darker stuff, but I prefer plots with a more balanced tone. Not totally vanilla, but not totally bleak, either. In hentai, if the girl is unwilling, then she has to eventually give in to the pleasure. And if she's gonna cry, she has to be crying tears of joy.

Last edited on 23 August 2024, 18:34.

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^@greengrasstree : Frankly, I'd side with you on 99% of cases...

I do realize that what I wrote comes out as sadistic, but I always had somewhat of a twisted reading of this doujinshi : Sakura here isn't "technically" being raped. The events that unfold are the byproduct of a common accord - albeit, a non-verbal one on Sakura's part. However, said events happen to be extremely degrading for her. Sakura is torn between her loyalty to the village, the parallel between her appreciation for the Sasuke she once knew and the overly disrespectful manner he now chooses to engage with her, and her relationship with Naruto (and also the fact she gets off to being mistreated and used like a sexual object, as shown in various other Sahara Wataru's works).
In this doujinshi in particular, she is unequivocally being abused, yet never even tries to put an end to things, despite possessing ample physical strength to at least attempt doing so (going by Naruto: Shippuden standards). On one panel, she is seen clenching her fist, perhaps out of anguish and shame or maybe anger and frustration, but evidently does nothing of it. And the abuse goes on. She is crying throughout most of the pages ... I like to imagine that her thoughts are in turmoil : she wants to get fucked by Sasuke, and thus endures the humiliation. Maybe, on some level, she believes that she deserves to be punished for being so useless ; and that, if she gets into his good graces, she might actually be of use to someone...

Now, this being said, this isn't even my favorite doujinshi by the author. But it has always been the one that stood-out the most.

Last edited on 23 August 2024, 12:11.

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This is essentially rape because Sasuke is going to kill her unless she joins him. Remember that Sasuke wanted everyone from Konoha dead at this point in the story. The only way he says he'll let her join him (and thus spare her life) in this doujin is if she becomes his bitch. Pretty sure she realizes that she can't defeat him in a fight, so she has no choice but to go by his demands.

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^@greengrasstree : True. But remember that, in this scene, Sakura is the one who chooses to approach Sasuke.
It is very bleak, I admit, but in the manga Sasuke *actually* tries to kill her. And rightfully so, as Sakura had come to attempt to assassinate him in the first place (even though she ends up hesitating and not going through with it). Unironically, this hentai rape version of events is more palatable to my head cannon.

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"In the first place", Sasuke was planning to kill everyone in Konoha, including Sakura. She simply attempted to kill him before he killed her and all her friends (and her parents). This is right after Sasuke betrayed Karin by stabbing her through the heart, too, and he was about to kill her when Sakura showed up. Sakura was completely justified to try killing him because he was a piece of shit who deserved to die.

This doujin is based on that scene, but with Sakura getting fucked by Sasuke instead. If she refused his demands here, then he would have killed her. So yes it's pretty much rape.

Anyway, I think this doujin is better if you like "emotional abuse":
/g/1116004/7180a51d4c/

Ino secretly takes over Sakura's body to have sex with Naruto, who finds out and fucks her real body against her will. This causes Ino to lose her mind and become addicted to sex, but it's not that depressing because she already used Sakura's body to have sex without her knowing before. If she wanted to have sex so badly, then she should have just used her own body and not used somebody else's to do it. She shouldn't keep on using other people's bodies just to have sex, so someone needed to put her in her place. Not that raping her was right, but there's no real reason to feel sorry for her.

These doujins by Pucchi are better, too; fairly similar art style to Wataru's:
/g/697875/158378e93c/
/g/682386/b901bc7a30/

I like those colored bonus illustrations by Wataru where Sasuke is forcing Sakura to give him head at swordpoint. Despite being visibly uncomfortable, she's clearly turned on as she's blushing and makes the ahegao face. As much as I dislike Sasuke, I wouldn't mind if Wataru made another doujin where Sakura is pressured to have sex with him. Just tone down Sasuke being a homicidal maniac and it won't be depressing to read. His attitude should be more like the doujin where he fucks Tsunade.

Last edited on 29 August 2024, 13:46.

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^@greengrasstree : Well, you won't find me disagreeing with Sasuke being a piece of shit haha xD

The problem I have with Naruto doing the raping in "Botan to Sakura" is that, as the main character, he still comes out as too much of a nice guy. So it doesn't really "feel" like abuse.
Like you said, no one is feeling sorry for Ino :((
And also, in hentai land, everyone, at some point, will want to have sex with the hero of the story.
It's even confirmed in Sahara Wataru's posterior works :
/g/1292773/938fd4325f/
/g/2001413/553b7c84a7/
every female in the village (and abroad) will try to have sex with Naruto if given the opportunity...

What draws my attention here is that, Sasuke being Sakura's former love interest, the situation creates much more drama between the two characters. There's gotta be a bond, something, to be ruined !
You know how in this one :
/g/743673/9eb6b20a17/
Sakura needs to "make up" for the fact she went on a date with Sasuke ? Well, in my mind, that's what a date with Sasuke looks like :D

Anyway, thank for your time and recommendations, good sir ;)

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why is this shit still getting updated lol

Edit: seriously stop updating this

Last edited on 29 December 2024, 00:10.

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