Artist: Karma Tatsurou

It sucks that most new translations coming out recently are low quality and or MTL.

Fan professionalism and care is dead

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I mean, this is this uploader's 2nd ever upload. My second ever upload wasn't much better, and that was about 6 years ago. Fan translations, especially from new translators, have always had a hit or miss quality, but hey, you get what you pay for (nothing).

To OP, not a bad job overall, but some of the typesetting is a little amateurish. Here's a guide that was given to me when I was starting out that I found useful: https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main

Additionally, using a text outliner can help you in situations where your text threatens to run outside the text box. If you use GIMP, here's a plugin I use: https://github.com/apocalyptech/gimp-text-outline

If you use another image editing software, I'm sure you can find something with a quick google search.

Other than that, the main advice I'd have is: Don't crowd the text boxes so much (a smaller font size would probably be fine) and don't be afraid to rephrase your translation to be a little more idiomatic (i.e. ask yourself "what is this box saying, and how would I say that in English?", then use that translation instead of whatever the "literal" translation is). Like I said, it's about 80% good stuff here, so for a second attempt, this is nothing to be ashamed of.

Edit: Sadly you're wrong Mistermd, this work was never translated, and other than this version, it's not up on any other sites. Just because Fakku licenses an artist doesn't mean they'll translate every single old work they've done.

Last edited on 29 December 2024, 18:34.

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With 'eyes' like that , how did he stay a virgin for so long ? ;)

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@davidgraham2121
To be fair this work is old like really old and I'm 99.9% sure it got a good english translation before, but for some reason all english works from Karma are getting purge from this site.
You need to go to other sites that have pirated Fakku content to see all of his works sadly.

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