Hello This is my first work that I uploaded :3

The story of a little boy who always bullies his friends, but over time he has a strange oddity and makes his hobby hidden, over time he starts to get addicted and it turns out that is his punishment in the past

I am trying to use a comic style with 1 to 2 panels in a vertical layout to make it easier to read, but if it's still hard to read, I will change the style in the next version :D

if you intrested feel free support me throught Patreon
www.patreon.com/c/mizuzu
mizuzu.fanbox.cc

(NEW)Chapter 2 :
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https://mizuzu.fanbox.cc/posts/9167592
https://mizuzu.fanbox.cc/posts/9176086

welcome to E-H

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Congratulations to your first comic.

It could be much improved by fixing the grammar (maybe have a native speaker (i.e. not me) proof-read it?
You mix up singular/plural ("Is this really my clothes?" -> "ARE THOSE really my clothes?"), you are leaving out words ("I'm so excited to wear"), you are using verbs in incorrect forms ("I forgot wash my clothes" => "I forgot TO wash my clothes", "I'm look [...]" => "I'm lookING"),...

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@tgtfbrasil thanks you :3

@D.rkGl.ss Thank you for the correction. I have some difficulty expressing myself in English, but I will try to improve my grammar in the future :D

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Put him a cage

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@Killershaodw117 I will do, and will make it more feminine in the next chapter

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