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Athletics Club Girl [Ongoing]

陸上サークルの子

Doujinshi
Posted:2025-01-06 18:46
Parent:3085953
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:28.68 MiB
Length:76 pages
Favorited:277 times
Rating:
126
Average: 4.40

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Posted on 06 January 2025, 18:46 by:   chiqui_7319    PM
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This is the official english release from Habutton's pixivFANBOX:

https://habutton.fanbox.cc/

The translation if sometimes credited to a certain "Ben", sometimes not.

I honestly think that it is not so good (too many different fonts, poor dialogues with too many "lol"...), probably because several people are working on it.
I hope someone will do a proper english translation once the story is complete.
Posted on 10 October 2024, 17:29 by:   Skittles666    PM
Score +82
why is there a "lol" at the end of every sentence. its annoying
Posted on 11 October 2024, 11:28 by:   impingainteasy    PM
Score +62
@Skittles666 the guy's sentences in the original Japanese all have the 笑 kanji at the end, which means "laughter." It's a verbal tic that I'm not sure there's a better way to translate other than "lol."
Posted on 11 October 2024, 17:54 by:   Mr Milkshake    PM
Score +36
This guy might be the best WG artist I've seen. Ever page just keeps getting better.
Posted on 24 October 2024, 06:19 by:   thealpacaking    PM
Score +19
Given the amount of "lol" does the translator just not know about laughter text like "heh" or "haha" etc? I dunno how much better or worse it would look but does anyone ever actually say lol?
Posted on 06 January 2025, 18:51 by:   notknow    PM
Score +38
But yeah you can be creative with laughing at the end of sentences:
Lol, hehe, haha, lmao, rofl, heh, mwahaha...and so on.
Posted on 06 January 2025, 19:13 by:   SSSdriver    PM
Score +24
Weight gain is normally not my thing but this artist does it pretty nicely.
Posted on 06 January 2025, 21:17 by:   GuroLover12    PM
Score -4
Average American
Posted on 07 January 2025, 08:58 by:   impingainteasy    PM
Score +6
@notknow To the best of my knowledge this is machine translated, so it's understandable that it doesn't take many creative liberties with the word choice.
Posted on 08 January 2025, 19:50 by:   Infinialt    PM
Score +6
I was really hoping she would go up to 100kg and then back down to being curvy rather than morbidly obese, but the dude is a shameless enabler when it comes to feeding her addiction. Would he be surprised if she keeled over from health complications? She lives for that mouth pleasure now and she looks to him for approval.

I've got a gf that's 100kg due to hormones and I'm 68kg and 6 inches taller at 6ft. We eat the same things.But this story really makes you realize how situations can become chronic and progressively easier to dismiss. It's motivated me to be more vigilant with my own habits, groceries and portioning, as well as encouraging regular healthy activities together. I think I bear a little bit of responsibility because my body type lets me eat far more than her, and I might also be modeling because I'll have snacks together with her.

Maybe that was the point of the story. The artist makes a LOT of bbw stories.

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