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Taken from DLSite: https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01317865.html

Credit for English translation belongs to HK

Wait a minute
Asanagi with (somewhat) wholesome story???
What in the wicked timeline are we in???

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Asanagi was reaaaal subtle in page 6, i wonder what he thinks of woke, is so hard to guess....xD

Also yeah, this is vanilla as far as i care, at least coming from him.

PS: extra ironic i don't get the Concord jokes since i never paid it any attention, my joke was about the dialogue (unless the Concord comments are about that too?), also doujin is great, i call it vanilla for him for very obvious reasons.

Last edited on 16 January 2025, 18:44.

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Featuring Bazz from the hit game Concord!

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This middle-aged man without a penny to his name turned his life around and became the head of a suicidal sex cult - what's your excuse?

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is that a fuckin concord reference on page 6

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This is going to sell a Concordillion in sales.

Based Uncle working better than a therapist while team.

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Asanagi's new thing where the girls are actually crazier than the dude is kinda funny ngl. The fact that he has no idea the girls are just tracking down girls similar to them to drag to their master is kinda scary

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a man see two suicidal horny super maso girls, mad at them wasting their "potential" and then start onlyfan-like business using them

this man may has dick for brain but business for heart

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Asanagi unironically came with a solution to the female loneliness epidemic.

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This guy has my kind of thinking when it comes to the female loneliness epidemic.

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FUCK YESSSSSS
SAVE WOMEN BY FUCKING THEM
MAKE THEM REALIZE THEIR PURPOSE IN LIFE
TO BE A FUCKTOY SLAVE TO THEIR MALE MASTER

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@BurnItDown; Yeah, it's really doing it for me. He's just following his dick and is clearly very into having a harem of masochist pigs, but half of it is just the kink talking. While the girls are actually deadly serious and fully embracing the masochist self-destructive existence to the point they are genuinely prepared to be killed off and thrown away if he gets bored of them (and turned on by it), to the extent that
Piggy only cut loose the girl who "made the grade" and left the rest to hang. Literally. Probably just because that girl had a cute face, big tiddies and was dripping wet as the rope was choking her to death.
That casual "Huh? That sounds a little sinister...." makes it clear he has no idea how deep in he is.......

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This is kino but why were the ages left out lol.
In the Japanese original version, the highschooler was explicitly said to be 16 and the oppai Loli was said to be a 14 year old.
Weird ass censorship lol.
Hope someone does a true translation in the future

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Concord jumpscare

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OMG its Bazz!

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These yandere girls are making a masochist harem.

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@TheDiabolical I agree with you, although kind of sad the petankos are left out, also the guy challenging the age old maxin: "Don't stick in crazy" and surviving!

And i still don't get the concord jokes sadly.

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guys only want one thing...

a harem of big titty ultra masochist sluts

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Mfw can't find a suicidal slut to corner the porn market.

FML.

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"There isnt another man alive who would rape such a shitty cunt"
I beg to differ. The craziest part of this story is how these two girls somehow didnt get dozens of men all over them either wanting to simp for them or take advantage of them.

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lmao, that page 6 is so ridiculous, i know it's all fiction but i truly hope asanagi IRL doesn't think that's really how progressive stuff works, lol

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@giga-ganon omg the fictional hentai isnt realistic!???!??!
Who coulda known.
Now shush fag

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@Damn Dane guy

they're not saying it needs to be realistic, just that Asanagi is a dumb motherfucker. draws great porn, but dude is a complete misogynist.

rip your goddam balls of you sorry cunt.

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I kneel, where the heck asanagi got inspiration from?
That guy can turn any theme into porn fetish.

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Another wholesome story

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Thanks OP for this TL. I see DLsite is back on their censorship bullshit, very funny that snuff and suicide makes the cut, but God forbid that we mention the ages of the 2d fictional girls, what's even the point in pretending? Visa and MasterCard left the site months ago and clearly DLsite aren't doing any worse than they were before since lolisho is still being sold, so why keep up this?

Either way it's laughable to poke fun at "woke" western politics but still bend the knee to make your work more "comfortable" for their eyes XD

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Asanagi once again hitting us with peak. The fact he's giving the idea of "assertive yet submissive masochism" a new spin is great, it's what always made his works unique imo.

Also the use of the word "goon". American cultural victory.

I don't get what's with the bodies in the background in the very last image though. Girls who weren't masochistic/had big tits?

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Page 21: "I'm disgusting, I know..."

That seems to be a mistake.
I'm fairly certain that that speech bubble doesn't belong to her. He's the one calling her disgusting, she's not saying it about herself.

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The noose in the cover got my hopes up for a "darker" ending, but I still really enjoyed it. I do wish Asanagi could turn down the incel shit just a little, some of his lines can be super fucking cringe.

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>Asanagi was reaaaal subtle in page 6, i wonder what he thinks of woke, is so hard to guess....xD

Considering he actually has had several doujins specifically about feminist theory that are generally positive on the idea, he probably genuinely doesn't care

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@Gespens well imagine if he start drawing hentai where the male is the one getting abused by big titty females, he would sell double as much, just to be conservative. ;-) ;-)

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@joseliski
"goon" is just the TL, it's not in the raw
>I don't get what's with the bodies in the background in the very last image though. Girls who weren't masochistic/had big tits?
I think it's probably supposed to be the suicide forest(or similar), it's mentioned the one chick still goes to suicide forums after the main story, so she stalks girls there and stops their suicide(s) like shown in the last few pages, so she can add them to her master's harem.
Captain Save-But-Beat-A-Hoe

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Few other authors feels like they have actual real unresolved hatred for women like asanagi. Even his "tame" works are extreme as hell.

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That face slappp, amazing.
We don't see masochism depcited like that very often, really nice!

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@giga-ganon
I mean, if you look at what some of the japanese artists think on twitter/x... maybe. Though honestly I think Asanagi is so far out there I don't really think it's a worst offender, far more put off by more mainstream stuff like Redo of Healer.

@DJjames I don't really think content extremity on it's own is enough say one way or the other, but it's the case "feminism" has become a more common topic in their work.

Honestly hentai is really fascinating, there's been some work on queer theory and lolicon communities in Japan: the old 4chan joke of "You self-insert as the little girl" is apparently no joke.

@Gespens
Curious about this, which one are you thinking about? Shindol's cattle industry comic comes to mind (imagine sending that to Carol J. Adams), but I don't really remember any Asanagi equivalent.

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Another good one from Asanagi but man I'm noticing the trend of the Gareki not getting scanned. Last time some legend managed to upload it several weeks after comiket hopefully we see the new one sometime this year. That's usually where he puts his harder stuff and even if half of it is recycled fantia works the other half is usually some of the best stuff he draws and it isn't available digitally anywhere until someone scans it.

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What a hopeful story

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