look I know you translated this, but it doesn't seem to make sense regardless. they had 24 pages, they could have at least tried to tell a coherent story.
I think it's a good start. It doesn't really have anything to go off of but story wise it sets up a beginning. Guy who draws hentai gets shamed by others because of it, and he's having it tough with new rumors about him spreading. Then he finds a tiny girl which may change things a lot for him. So far story makes sense