The translation is complete garbage!!! No wonder I couldn't feel a single thing while reading this, it was like characters reading a script in a monotone voice!
At first I thought the doujin was bad, but at the last page "Sonnani Yashashiku Shinaide" literally means "Dont be so kind to me!" A lovely melancholic line turned into the trash "Be kind to me, don't tease me". Asuka turns completely out of character even with the 'date' context. Fuck this translator!