Re-Write, English, Aida Mai, Decensored

Don't even give a fuck this ntr,I hate crappy rewrites.

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Dat ugly dad got me to read this!, downloading!

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Blech!! I've seen enough of that wife-stealing crap. I'm watching One Piece.

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Ok so the newlyweds have to live with the women's father and he just so happens to have incest sex with her.

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So is the baby her sister or daughter?

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English translation: /g/437755/07dbea4018/

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