Story is... Meh, I mean, it tries to be funny and somewhat romantic but... It kinda fails on the funny part, and the romance is too simplistic. I blame it mostly on little knowledge we have of the characters themselves. All I get is that we have a grumpy almost asexual cheetah and a slutty antelope in love.
Artwork is average as well. Simplistic shading... Some of the poses were a bit odd... But overall, I think it's acceptable. The backgrounds are average as well, and wherether the play with the bedroom's background in some scenes by leaving a gradient fill or nothing at all just to make the viewer focus more on the characters works or not, depends mostly on who's reading.
Finally, this is a comic mostly for the guys who actually like and follow the author and/or for guys who are interested in these kinds of story. It's yet another regular fan-comic from the Sonic Fandom, and I believe it deserves, at the best, an average score of 3. The plot is the biggest problem, while the artwork is not really that bad, but not worth giving a bigger score for it either.