Wow. Straight-up passionate love-making. Don't see much of those these days.

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Wow, that was a new experience. There was no dialogue whatsoever, with the first word said other than the moans and sound effects was on page 23. I think it still is a good doujin, with all the pages dedicated to all that H stuff that ppl enjoy.

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This author is like one of the only ones that does a doujin that really fits the idea of "Making Love" I would say. Cut the crap dialog no one says during actual sex and do it right, over and over and over again

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I agree that most dialogue during sex scenes are unnecessary, but it still would've been great if there was a story leading up to the sex scene.

@iwillnottypeyourname: I'd rather have both, and atleast twice as much, because 5 pages isn't enough.

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That was...intense.

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the no dialogue effect gives a different somewhat nice feeling

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I agree that most dialogue during sex scenes are unnecessary, but it still would've been great if there was a story leading up to the sex scene.

I would rather have an additional 5 pages of fucking than 5 pages of building up to a story that 99% of the people don't give a shit about.

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need reseed pls ty

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