few Mimi Tasogare,( ( Duel Masters )_ pictures i have drawn

there is just not enough of this awesome oppai loli. great sketches. although the hands look like razor sharp bird claws

Base +8, venomr +7

Oh God, why are you still drawing?
Are you even TRYING to get better? This looks just as bad as your first galleries of "sketches."

No, deviantart is not the place to go if you want to improve in any capacity. All you get at deviantart are people who tell you, "Wow! That looks great! So kawaiii desu ne niichaaaan~" They /never/ help you.
If someone wants to actually improve, you need to go to a serious community, and you likely need to take classes.
If the creator of the gallery's a serious artist, they'll sign up at ConceptArt.org, and open a sketchbook thread. They'll listen to people who tell him that his people don't look like people. That he should be studying anatomy harder, drawing from life more, and not focusing on drawing in his "style."
Hell, even going to posemaniacs and practicing for 15 minutes a day would help. But you know what? I'm willing to bet like most people who draw, Moaja isn't going to take this advice. They're going to keep drawing the way they do in their own style because at the end of the day, they're not an artist. Not. One. Bit.

Base +9, Drax -10, linkolek -8

Not bad but you'll meet lots more people like necron around here. I suggest taking your work to places like deviant art to gain appreciation/constructive feedback.

Base +4

No need to worry Nec. I wont enter Dev.art. I have been banned from there years ago & that Twice, & other 2 times they erased most of my stuf, but not becouse it looked so terrible as it does here , they didnt liked the content. I dont try to draw realistic becouse I dont draw portraits of this world humans,

Base +7

I think these sketches are pretty sweet. Draw for youself and at your own pace. Keep at it

Base +6