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The Captive (By Zed)

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Posted:2011-04-04 07:55
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:6.76 MiB
Length:30 pages
Favorited:88 times
Rating:
49
Average: 3.26

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Posted on 04 April 2011, 07:55 by:   zededd2000    PM
Uploader Comment
My first actualy comic attempt. This was before I used speach-bubbles or mapped out the dialogue.
Posted on 05 April 2011, 11:12 by:   Nightforce    PM
Score +12
it is rather nice, but i believe improvement is in order, as proofreading too, find some miss-spelled words here and there...
hope we can find the improved on soon
Posted on 07 April 2011, 05:24 by:   Enki17    PM
Score -20
You are one sick fuck. Do keep trying though.
Posted on 10 April 2011, 19:48 by:   tomguy    PM
Score +2
That's pretty good, using text like that to barely have to make any image changes at all, heh. Though this girl looks way too much like a caveman. Use one with less of a butt face.

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