An admittedly shaky translation (using NJStar WP, and taking almost 6 hours)
of the original Raws uploaded by Gtdragon here: /g/342882/8647bedd4d/
I believe i have the overall gist of each page's dialogue, but that's all I'll claim.

I would HAPPILY welcome someone whose Japanese is much more fluent to do a more professinal job of it. Email me @ [email protected] if you'd like my notes, a copy of the Raws already downloaded, etc.

There is just something about this 2/3 body tattoo that ALMOST looks like some dainty, elegant body stocking... whilst she engages in extremely coarse, crude, extreme public sex... the contrast that creates...that is unique and unforgettable. I took a shot at translating it myself because I wanted the full experience the artist wanted to convey. I think I've achieved maybe 90% of that. I'd love somebody who actually knows what they're doing to polish this up.

Hinoron here. This being my first Gallery posted, I have not been able to figure out where to change the Resize option for the gallery from "no, originals only" to "yes, resize for browsing" (which is what I see in most other people's galleries and I assume would be preferred by most viewers). Comment a solution if you have it; I will check back here later.

@lockjoe1: Never heard of hongfire before. Therefore, I could not. :P

@ Junk66: I used the NJStar Japanese WP's Radical tool (to rebuild the kanji I see on the page... if I can) Then the Kanji Info, and Dictionary tools to help identify them. I wouldn't even be able to try if I didn't know a fair bit of Japanese myself to start with, but I was never fully fluent and my Kanji are particularly weak, so I depended on the NJ-Crutch. :P

UPDATE:
Had another non-fluent friend of mine take a swing at this with his big ol' paper JAP->ENG dictionary (or was it a kanji guide? whatever..) He found 3 words I couldn't find the characters for:
肉便器: nikubenki – woman who is treated as a sex object.
小便: shouben – piss.
共: kyou, tomo – together, both.
That doesn't change a whole lot, save that we now know Asuka is peeing on page 7 (I thought she was squeezing out multiple creampies from the previous pages), and that the men are both cumming and peeing on her bukkake on page 11.
(Gimme a break; it's a B&W pencilsketch work :P)...I personally liked it a tiny bit better unaware of the pee everywhere, but to each their own. This artist does go for the extreme. :P

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you could have just asked somebody on hongfire to translate this shit. also the images are ok, no need resizing in my opinion.

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OK, I'll say this much, Freud would be having a field day if he saw this comic.

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How exactly does NJStar help you translate from a Japanese manga? Or in this case img set.

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Nice art! like the way you draw Asuka and the body art

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Good job, great translation, hopefully you can translate other works by this artist

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