The first story looked really good. The second story I had to look at twice to realize that it was Rukia. I thought it was Orihime with messed up hair on first glance.
I like the Bleach series. But there isn't a whole lot of doujins that I care for of this series. This one is the exception. Big thumbs up. I agree with the first poster. The artist for the second story didn't do a good job of differentiating Rukia and Orihime in the face departement. Looks like Orihime with a Rukia wig on. First half was good but it went downhill at halftime.