Translated by Ibelin
Edited by Super Shanko

Thanks a lot!! everyone who made this work possible.

The kid & dark elf were cute (in a bubbly sweet way), but his brother was a real bastard!

Edit: Considering how she's way older despite her looks, it could have turned into one of those things where the little brother grows up into adulthood while she pretty much looks the same and they have a nice little relationship and so on. But by the older brother turning her into a slut puppy like he did, it totally fucks that idea up because he sucks.

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is it really THAT hard to draw an elf story without rape or ntr? *sigh* so sad...

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I like the drawing style a lot but I do agree that this could have done well without the rape.

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Coulda been an adorable vanilla, but NOOOOOOOO, it had to be NTR/Rape. Don't get me wrong, I still fapped, but I wish it had been different.

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Considering the usual [Doi Sakazaki] works I've seen, this is extremely...
Normal?

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How the hell is this NTR/Rape? She's enjoying it without losing control of herself, and she had no intention of being with boy in the same way. To be honest, I dunno why the brother even bothered with the chloroform!

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I will admit art is good most of times, I still wonder how in the world you can get aroused by stories like this unless you are into cuckolding, the thing about imagining yourself as the "stealer" just doesn't cut it.

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In terms of NTR content this was really quite weak. There was little connection between the elf girl and the little boy other than fondness. NTR really doesn't punch you in the gut until the scene where it is revealed to the guy who is having his girl stolen from him, and not even that happened in this story.

This was pretty normal.

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i hate it when two main chars are having a nice relationship together and random fag comes in and ruins it.

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I finally see a good elf story with nice art,but it had to have rape or ntr =.=

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The final is very sad

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Its to bad this turned into another rape story. I probably would have enjoyed it more if turned into a romance story between her and the kid.

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Meehhh the rape kinda killed this for me. I thought the boy and elf were cute. Good art but the story was meh

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I didn't see the tags so I hadn't switched to "NTR mode". My heart had to recover with this one: /g/623819/8cb794c7f5/

Last edited on 25 September 2014, 14:44.

Base +5, rotar zairo -5, Crimson Savior -6, MrSeyker +6

Elf? Oh boy... Wait, no rape? That was actually unexpected. Oh wait, it has NTR.

Carry on then.

Sigh

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This was some shitty NTR. The kid didn't find out. I'm sorry but if you want to get me to fap, I'm going to need more tears, broken hearts, and more regrets from the female. And a worse ending wouldn't hurt.

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I opened up without checking the tags. As soon as I saw the brother's face I knew immediately what I was in for.
God fucking dammit.

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I only found it alright but the butt-hurt on the comments made me cum buckets.

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