Comedy gold by Newdog15.
http://dave-littler.livejournal.com/tag/newdog15

Rewrite of Ogata Mamimi's Juugoya Otsuki-sama ni Onegai wo (A Wish on the Moon of the Fifteenth Night).
Raw: /s/4d00f4d035/91923-34

Gasp newdog, hooray!! And just when I thought I'd never have to read such horrendous writing ever again, once more he returns.

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Not a fan of rewrites, but the title is most certainly hilarious!

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There were only two parts of this that really had me in a giggling fit: the title, and the bottom portion of Page 6. The rest of it was pretty mediocre.

Base +16, Capi duffman +7, Katana +25, Blue Mage -9, Hyperbeast +9, bucket90 +5, Rent-A-Tree -6, djgee2f +7, absciss9 +15

Ugh.... newdog, stop with the crappy rewrites..... they just waste space on this website. NO ONE likes your rewrites.

Base +4, ElementFD +8, Mageta +12, komander +6, marconii2002 +9, Hitsuyou-H -14, digitXSX -9, daipingan -1, CPR +8, Sancho_Panza +8, fdsafdsfsd +10, altereggo -17, dnlight +9, and 25 more...

where can i find the Original one?

Base +5, bucket90 +5, Rent-A-Tree -6, flllaa +6

What the fuck is this shit!

Base +9, Katana +25, RandomStranger +8, Blue Mage -9, Beane -10, bucket90 +5, Canavi +14, Rent-A-Tree -6

There is so much text in my h-doujin.

Base +8, Blue Mage -9, Beane -10, Rent-A-Tree -6

Why do I feel like I'm reading a 19th century novel? o.O

Base +6, Sancho_Panza +8, Blue Mage +9, Beane +10, bucket90 +5, Rent-A-Tree -6, Thelemonish +6, djgee2f +7, baneonplane +8

Fuck.. I didn't notice it was a rewrite :<
I can't believe i wasted my creds on this shit...

Base +13, Blue Mage -9, Beane -10, Canavi +14, Rent-A-Tree -6, Molyneuxis +6

hm...i really want to see the original and see how shitty the rewrite is...

Base +2, bucket90 +5, Rent-A-Tree -6, Molyneuxis +6

I'm not suprised it got a 1.5/5 on a website made for autistic 12-year-old aspies who do nothing but fantasize of becoming young girls. I mean really, grow the fuck up and learn the difference between real life and loli's

Base +6, bucket90 +5, Canavi -14, Rent-A-Tree +6, CPR -6, Kent_Ownzinger -8, Hyperbeast -6, sable1 -17, MeloTheYellow -6, Mrsuperhappy -21, Molyneuxis -6, schoolchannel -6, baneonplane -8

So the raw gallery is removed, but they decided to keep an unnecessarily stupid rewrite? Fine I'll use another website for this manga

Base +6, Molyneuxis +6, baneonplane -8