Translated/Edited by: Yoroshii
http://yoroshii.ryuutama.com/

After breaking Takeru's computer with the manga he's been working on, Akane offers to replace it by becoming the heroine of his manga.

It's cute, and everything is well drawn. If you like vanilla work you will like this.

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Looks like Jun's experimenting with his art style, so this particular doujin looks like a transitional phase, but a good one. Anyone familiar with his works will see a surprising amount of restraint in his usual taste for proportions, as well as some differences in how he draws the face of this particular girl.

In fact, a good comparison of both face and proportions would be the story Purity Before After, found at /g/364466/23456bd937/

You can also see signs of changes in the way he draws faces in Perverted Curiosity.

I expect to see several other changes in whatever future works he decides to do, but I like where I think he's going with it. And of course, experiment or not, in terms of look and feel of the doujin, it's 100% Jun.

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nice upload. And based on the last page, looks like the tankoubon out in 14 oct, great.

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My face after each and every Jun's work : ^_^

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Oh it's another one from Jun I bet it will be fabulous~

Edit: I was not dissapointed.

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I think it's just her upper torso to be slimmer and overall smaller, thus making her look out of proportion compared to other Jun's works. Tell you what, I like the way her breasts stand out thanks to the chest being skinny, even though I'm not into nekomimi (I find it a hindrance more than a turn-on) I think an eye can be closed thanks to the quality of this doujin.

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Man this is just great =D

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http://rojiurajack.sakura.ne.jp/sblo_files/rojiurajack/image/C80E3839DE382B9E382BFE383BC.jpg

soon

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this is awesome

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Rapijng my womb... LMFAO

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Not bad, pretty hot. I liked that there seemed to be a lot of anatomy put into drawing the womb and whatnot.

High point of the whole thing: "RAPE MY WOMB WITH YOUR DICK SEMEN!!" The internet is now complete.

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you can't rape the willing.

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anyone know where i can find the tank?

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Vanilla all ova mah keyboard!

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Is not Rape if you like it

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Another stupid guy who dont have the brains to have a backup on a memory disk somewhere else and not just on the pc....
Oh well, the plot is classic jap stereotypical like after all.
The art is pretty good as well.

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And he still turned out and wrote this for the winter event! Awesome!

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I'm just curious just how terribly his cables were placed for this event to happen at all.
The computer's clearly on his desk before she trips over some cables.

It's probably just the doujin god at work...

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@Neklin I imagine that Takeru planed it all out, not only did he have backups but also intentionally moved the cables with his foot to trip Akane (just like what Termt said) knowing she would feel guilty, dress up like a cat and than have sex with him.

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more than anything he turn on the computer while it still wet...

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