This should have been done with a ray-tracer... Really bad 3d artifacts and low-quality models for the job. Not worth it. The composition and choice of pose is good though, so if just the models and the lighting are improved, it would be a pretty good set.
Ummm, alright. Good for you. I never asked for your critiquing, nor will I consider it. You like it or you don't. Simple as that. Sometimes it's better to reserve yourself, especially if you have nothing useful to say. Such as unnecessary critiques. I don't pay attention to things like raytracing, when I am rendering 40+ pictures I can't afford to waste 10 minutes on one render. Please know where you stand before saying things like this. For me I think that the content supersedes the quality most of the time.
Also "low quality models" I am using V4.2, M4 and Genesis....If you don't know which clearly you don't These are some of the latest models.
[EDIT: Thank you Itzaguy for understanding my point]