Saw this lying around here: /g/405576/82e714659d/ so far untranslated into english and couldn't resist putting my meagre skills into making it available into english. :)

And now for the usual stuff: As implied above, I'm no pro-translator, no pro at editing/working images in Paint and English isn't my first language, so if there's errors relating to any of these three issuses: sorry, but that's to be expected - I try to do my best though. Well, enjoy!

This is why Kodaka went out with Sena instead... beside he's still got 2 loli, a reverse-trap maid, and a fujoshi at his disposal...

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I fucking love you for translating this. My penis and I thank you deeply.

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the new posting has 18 and 22 not translated btw

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I usually don't like NTR, but for some reason I couldn't care less about this one. It's probably because I can't stand Yozora & think she's a bitch, especially compared to 2D loving, loli hugging Sena.

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ability-to-draw wise, this art is interesting
accuracy-to-actual-characters wise, its pretty bad

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Eh, this is pretty weak for an NTR story and for a Friends story.

Characters are barely recognizable, besides there names one would never know this has anything to do with friends.

The "Master" we know literally nothing about and the whole "hypnosis" thing is way too abstract, what is the medium he is using? Is it an object? a key word? It seems more like psychokinesis then anything since he can freeze people with no setup or key word.

A good NTR needs to be remotely tangent to the story to really create that sense of it could actually happen. With harem series especially if you don't get all the girls, especially the most favorite one (Sena) then people won't rage well.

A good NTR story for this gal would be:
10 years prior when she was going to see him dressed as a girl before he left town she gets captured by a molester and blackmailed/threaten into a sex slave. Fast forward 10 years and the story goes on as normal but the dark side of it is the molester with the help of Yozora begins to make the other girls of the club into sex slaves as well behind Kosada's back.

I think that would make a much more interesting series.

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This would be amazing if it were not so over-censored.

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Meat was going to win anyway this really isn't even ntr.

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I think this is the continuation of this /g/187696/d870f6f357/

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I love u so much (^.^)<3 Been hoping for Null Mayu's stuff to be translated sometime. Thx bunches, many kisses XD

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So do Meat fanboys annoy anyone else? I swear they put the damn thing on a Pedestal and it's really annoying. Yozora is kind of a bitch yeah, but she has her reasons for why she's like that but no one seems to ever give a damn and insists that she's just a bitch "because" unlike Meat who they worship. It's so damn annoying, I don't mind if someone likes Meat better then Yozoroa but it pisses me off to see so many people just call her a Bitch without trying to understand why she's like that and then praise Meat.

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Anyone else think the "Master" looked like the Major from Hellsing?

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You know the worlds coming to an end when people are over analysing doujinshi, just rub it out and move on.

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@Allen Noah - actually, he reminds me of Gabe Newell.
also these facial expressions are simply amazing.

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RAGE ! FAP FAP FAP THEN RAGE ! *my dick approves*

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Holy shit, this was 6 years ago... Fuck it, I'm petty enough to necro this.

@BlickWinkel Naw man, Yozora's a bitch, even with context. Like she bullies everyone except Kodaka. She tricked Maria and Yukimura (prior to them finding out she's a girl) into doing shit for her own amusement, not because they were perceived as rivals (in terms of both platonic and romantic relationships). Yozora's so petty, she initially hates her sister for being an extrovert. Like no one even knew she had a sister until her sister greets her. It's already bad she picks on Sena because of pettiness and jealousy, but she has a lousy personality in general. In my eyes, she has zero redeeming features. Hell, even a KodakaXPegasus NTR story would have been a hundred times more interesting and sympathizable, and it would still make sense, since he really wants Kodaka to marry into his family and does have a homo-for-Kodaka's Dad vibe going on. In the whole Sena vs Yozora debate, Sena's objectively better. She's academically smarter, physically more athletic, and she tries really hard to be a part of the club, to a fault. Her poorer qualities includes acting like an overachiever and is boastful, naive, and bratty. Yozora's clever, snarky, and well... that's just it. Other than that, she's antisocial, hates pretty much everyone who's popular, condescending (trust me, that's worse than being boastful), a bully, and manipulative. That's a really toxic person. Just because her life might have sucked does not excuse her from dragging other people down. She's damn well aware of what she's doing too.

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and here i am again..the thing about et it slide by mistake ealways get me here!

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The fuck? You left out the last page.

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