This one would benefit greatly from a translation. The artwork is good, but unfortunately there has obviously been a mad rush to finish the doujin for C81. Toning is dropped after page 18, and inking after page 22. If this was properly finished it would be good and with decensor, translation and coloring by Nisemididoronokai it would be godly. Right now it's just somewhat meh.
Pilfer: This is the second part of a side story; the main arc itself is 15+ chapters long, and many of the early doujins either aren't scanned or the raws are of awful quality. Basically that means no chance for a translation unless Murasaki Shu re-publishes those early stories.
Weren't the first chapters re-released for c80? Maybe he'll re-publish the others as well in good time. I really hope he does, I would love to see this series translated, and good and available scans are a good start toward reaching that goal.