Did you forget to level this? It looks awful when all of your erase marks are plainly and distractingly visible.

Base +15, Meowmux +8, 188Kasrkin +5, wp2243 +6, Arget +12, jaylou1010 +6

He would stop putting out this shit if people would stop paying him to...

@Exp1osion: Maybe we would be a little more lenient if this wasn't the his SIX HUNDRED FORTY EIGHTH RELEASE. He NEVER takes critiques to heart, he NEVER puts any effort into his work, he NEVER improves. I've looked at his translations in Japanese, and they're wrong whenever you go above a simple sentence. I've looked at his editing, and it's lazy. What needed to be fixed in this doujin could have been fixed with a solid 5 minutes of work. Not to mention the English failures we get constantly in his work, proving he doesn't proofread, and in some cases leaving us wondering if he even read the sentence as he was typing it.

It's a good doujin, that has nothing to do with CGR. CGR ruins doujins. If you don't care about the speech bubbles, read the raw. At least that way the experience isn't marred by spotty translating and half-assed editing.

Base +17, wavedash +8, 188Kasrkin +5, wp2243 +6, Kudowafu +13, Zakuzelo +6, Hitsuyou-H +17, Bobangock +5, Marisa Kirisame +1, ferongr +3, Cruelty +7, Silvie +13, Dammon +28, and 2 more...

This is par for the course for CGR. It shouldn't really be a surprise by now. Questionable translations + bare minimum effort + No QC to catch the obvious mistakes = CGR quality. Lesson to new editors: Leveling is your friend. Doing that simple step does wonders for most doujins. It's definitely the case for this one.

Base +15, Kudowafu +13, mickey711 +8, Zakuzelo +6, jaylou1010 +6, Ilosia +11, 188Kasrkin +5, burakumin +12, eeekkk9 +8, wp2243 +6, KPasa +7, Refon_S +7, ioctl +9, and 12 more...

Oh well, here's what a real version of this might look like: /g/452976/e38bbfc3c8/
Cropping, leveling, actual English... All that silly stuff.

Actually, taking another look, you did take the time to level a few of the pages. Good work--they look a lot better than the raw!

Base +17, jaylou1010 +6, 188Kasrkin +5, Kudowafu +13, wp2243 +6, KPasa +7, iliekmudkips +4, Hitsuyou-H +17, themasamune +10, Marisa Kirisame +1, Hellscythe123 +10, Cruelty +7, Silvie +13

Whats with the hate? It's a good doujin, translations aren't utterly perfect but definitely still decent. the speech bubbles arent all that distracting... if you were focusing on the text in this doujin, you're doing something wrong. I'm glad the guy spent the effort to TL this.

Base +7, wp2243 -6, Kudowafu -13, Long Hair Enjoyer -14, Zakuzelo -6, 188Kasrkin -5, jaylou1010 -6, angrybull +7, Secundus -8, Hitsuyou-H -17, Bobangock -5, burakumin -12, KPasa -8

Tch. another doujin ruined by CGrascal's terrible translations and editing. Disgraceful.

Base +4, No.TwentyOne -6

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Base +8