Yikes. The yandere is strong with this one. Thanks!

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I'll keep killing him so we can be together forever. Flawless Logic!!

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Who does notice a hatchet in the bed where they fuck?

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Isn't Yuno supposed to be obsessive yandere, not possessive yandere.

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Errors everywhere in this. Besides the usual antics of "Girl inexplicably loses all of her strength for the sake of getting raped", there are problems with the artwork that directly contradict events in the manga. It's sad to see a so-called fan of the series releasing a doujin with such a critical lack of knowledge about said series.

@youngfolk

You should practice what you preach.

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I can't say I liked the doujin. For starters Yuno is a killing machine with the right focus, and being touched by a man other than Yukitero is enough to make her go on a murdering spree.
As Bobangock said, if you make a doujin of a series, you should at least be little faithful to the original spirit. It pains me seeing something like this in an author I really like, like Yuzuki N Dash.

About the hatchet. That part happened in the original manga too, but it was Yuno the one who was lying down, so it's actually possible not noticing the weapon.

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[X] genuflect

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@Capi duffman @Bobangock
If you know a lot about Mirai Nikki, you should know that this exact situation happens in the manga & anime. If Yukki was even a few minutes slower in reaching Yuno, like he was in this doujin, she would have had dicks inside her. She was already forced down by 10 people and had her clothes ripped apart in the manga & anime.
She can't go on a murdering spree because they have her pinned down. Before they do, she was killing them left & right.
@Bobangock
Yuzuki had her as a virgin in here to accentuate the NTR. Having your girl's virginity stolen by another is like the ultimate insult. Yuzuki obviously knows she wasn't at that time. I hope you aren't expecting NTR doujins to hold 100% to the storyline, because that's just stupid.
Yes, she attempts the kill, and succeeds in this. As I say later, that's artist liberty to mold the story to her liking for her doujin. If it was the exact same as the mango, it wouldn't be a fitting end for this type of raw, gritty doujin.


Saying Yuzuki n Dash doesn't know the material is also false because of the second half, *SPOILER* where Yuno kills Yukki to reset the game, which also happens in the manga, and will in the anime.

This doujin is the closest Mirai Nikki I've seen to canon (except for a few things, but that's artist liberty), between both the storyline & art. They all fit perfectly, though I think Yuzuki's art is better than Esuno Sakae's.

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Am not specifically against NTR specially if it have happy ending after all ;D

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The cult arc; I don't remember it ever being confirmed but there were several hints throughout those chapters that Yuno had been poisoned. Don't forget that she almost went unconscious and had a strange fever for some odd reason. That said I don't really like this doujin. Raping Yuno is not something fun to read about. She suffered enough in the manga and anime itself as is.

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So to make this Doujinshi worse. It concerns Netorare and rape with the more sympthetic version of Lucy from Elfin Lied, it has so so art, Yuno looks ugly here, and to top it all off it's translated by CGRascal so you feel even more unclean. All in all this is a pretty shitty read.

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Yanderes. Impossible to ntr

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If he did this in the first place he wouldn't have ANY problems throughout the series... What a dumbass.

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so i guess this got cut from the anime?

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Yuno: The ultimate anti-NTR weapon.
This is why I love ya.

....Oh shi- I-I mean "love" in a sense of a admire a higher deity, not as male and female kind of love....So please put down the axe, thank.

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thank you .... xso cool

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Yuno killed Akise, there's no way she could be raped

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