This Gantz doujin happened to come up in a forum thread, so I looked it up here on EXH and thought that the English translated version that was originally uploaded (/g/131680/229f2f2c5c/) could use some improvement.

I used the larger Japanese raw images (/g/163335/df09ce4b45/) as a source.

I edited the dialogue so it reads better for English audiences but this isn't a rewrite! I tried to keep the spirit of the original translation.

I did some graphics editing for those areas that weren't done very well in the previous English release.

I stitched together the two pics of Reika's upper and lower halves to make one large image.

Your work is very appreciated.

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Wow! This is a brilliant job in fixing up. Well done and thank you very much!

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Hann0225, Thank you very much for adding value to the entire translated work.

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This just in; I love you for this (mad homo).

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didnt think u could get worse than the original gantz ._.

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Thank you so much, dude

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thanks for share. i love Gantz Reika

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Ah nice, this doujin was actually the first thing i had ever seen from Gantz, i think 4-5 years ago.

Too bad the real Gantz manga just didn't work for me when i tried it later. Kurono was unfortunately just too much of a selfish idiot for me, and that's a bit of a problem for a protagonist, i just couldn't like him.

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@Rendarg
Give it a second chance. The MC (Kurono) changes his behavior throught the history.Gantz is a good manga.

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http://www.doujinshi.org/book/12145/GAMTZ/
RAW: /g/163335/df09ce4b45/
English Translation: /g/131680/229f2f2c5c/
French Translation: /g/105273/8ba3ef0d24/
Spanish Translation: /g/18804/d277a407c8/
Portuguese Translation: /g/478782/8443341f9f/
Russian Translation: /g/820237/fa9e264379/
Korean Translation: /g/614285/42e0b49335/
Chinese Translation: /g/434212/cde48a2599/

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Nice editing, but there are some very crucial mistakes in translations, mostly because I'm assuming the translator misread some of the more ambiguous Japanese lines and was confused who was speaking it (Reika or the aliens) and made logical deductions based on wrong assumptions. Some of these are minor errors that has not much to do with the story, but some are pretty big.

# 26: Definitely the biggest mistake, Reika saying "Kuruno... makes me do this. I don't care if he watches me." what the fuck was this even supposed to mean? I'm assuming the translator didn't understand that part in Japanese, so he just wrote fucking nonsense that makes no sense whatsoever. What she said was something more like "Kurno would never do that to me," revealing that the part where she has loving sex with Kurno in the middle was all fake and it was her being delusional and imagining the aliens gang-raping her as her having sex with Kurno. She was making more shit up in her head as the aliens continued raping her, but when it reached the point where she shit herself because of the intense anal fucking, she couldn't keep making more delusions as it was too much for a daydream about having sex with her love, as Kurno would never anally fuck her so hard that she shit herself on the bed. At this point, her heart is totally shattered, she completely loses her self-esteem as she realizes she is just an abandoned puppy who was having delusions about having sex with her one-sided love while being gang-raped by aliens. But the translations don't fucking show any of this.

What the aliens say about taking Reika as their "house pet" is also completely wrong in 3rd panel. It's actually the complete opposite as they say it's about time to end this promise with the livestock slave who shits itself. The promise refers to them "promising" not to kill nearby civilians if Reika becomes their slave and gets fucked by them, mentioned in the beginning of the doujinshi. They say it's time to end it as they are about to kill her, as their "round 2" means killing humans because that's what they love doing.

# 27: "Even a real treasure like this one?" Not even close, again completely opposite. They say more like "let's start cutting her apart," as they really don't consider her in high regard despite her great body and instead look down on her after she shit herself.
bottom pannel "we could tie her up". Nope, it's way darker, as they talk about cutting her hands and feet off first so that they could enjoy her shouting/sobbing because of pain, as they enjoy killing more than fucking, so they were about to start torturing her in public before killing everyone.

# 28: "The power of X-gun?" Another crucial mistake. The alien says "the coordinates were already set in?" as it gets destroyed, meaning Reika purposefully got gang-raped despite already being ready to kill them all at any time. Pretty fucked up, but she was so distraught by not being loved by Kurno that she had to get that sex urge satisfied somewhere else, so she was purposefully getting raped by aliens while imagining it as Kurno having sex with her. Very fucked up.

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Well that's one way to enjoy being raped.

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