I was Tired of waiting for someone to translated so I wrote in the way i would see it.

I know rewriters don't try too hard on editing, but this is just too much.

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Don't upload your shitty garbage. No one wants to read crap like this.

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Wow this is terrible. I don't mean the writing, well that's not great but understandable. But it is the terrible editing. What did you possibly use. Paint on a XP. How did you look at this and say "yep I should post this". There is so many better things you could have used. There is aviary, Paint +, Photoshop, but this this just terrible.

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This is by far the worst thing I have ever seen. I think my eyes are bleeding.

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"hey, wanna know a secret? I'm super horny right now!"

amazing. amazingly bad. i wasn't aware of this doujin's existance, so thanks for that, as well as the cheap laugh.

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Obvious troll is obvious.

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I agree this was garbage like the worst translated crap ever. I'm not trying to be mean but you could have taken more time editing this since no one has translated this beside in Korean. Anyways if people hate it so much how come barely anyone has petition a expunge? Only 5%?

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What the hell is this? Did you just shit all over this thing? Not only is the translation horrible but the type looks completely god-awful. In fact, I can still see Japanese characters in some of the bubbles. Nobody wants to see shit this bad.

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Very interesting its a different take from what im used to

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"Please Masterfuck." LOL! Also, fail attempt of a drawn Chocobo.

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RAW: /g/337344/251af36556/

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Good job, great translation, hopefully you can translate other works by this artist

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salty fools, final fantasy xiii sucks and lighting is a cum slut

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