AWESOME! had a hell of a time translating this!!! ARSENAL is now my no.1 artist and i will continue to translate more of his works!

this is the 3rd manga that i translated(chapter wise) the artist is ARSENAL...just started this translation stuff about a few months ago...I will keep the "ecchi sfx" as is cuz its my preference...

actually I was tranlsating chapter 3 of ARSENAL'S "I my me mine"; but then i got side tracked and translated this chapter from "sexual excitement milk hall"...now i'm currently tranlslating ch.4 of "I my me mine"...and i think ill finish it!

@notsureifsrs: ok ill fix the issue on the sfx and ill equalize the font size and spacing to make them larger (still i'm doing everything by myself so i get lazy often and take a break once in a while...)

@"everyone who posted positive": ok since i got a majority thumbs up on this translation, this means im on the right track.
will continue translating more arsenal...dont know how to coordinate with other translators that well though...

-ok im really annoyed here, if finished translating ch3 of the other manga that i was translating(i my me mine) AND uploaded it in this site...BUT for some unknown reason "This gallery is pining for the fjords." pops out when if finished uploading it then after one day it was taken down...tried it twice, still the same...so right now I am unable to share my translations to you guys...can anyone help?

-uploading the STUFF--->finished uploading/publicized/view front page/--->>>"This gallery is pining for the fjords."--->waiting half an hour--->fuck its gone...(gallery does not exist)--->maintain galleries(got nothin on that new one i just uploaded)--->dont know why they took it off??????!!!!######

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Okay, so now that I've read a couple of your translations I think I can give some judgment:
1. They seem somewhat liberal. I'm chill with that if it's for jokes and such, but make sure you get everything plot-wise. (I know, I know, lol caring about porn plots)
2. I'm okay with not translating sfx and such since I can still read them and I know they're awkward to do. The thing is, plenty of readers can't read them. You'd have to get a census on this, though. For porn sfx usually doesn't matter as much since it's usually smacking, schlicking, etc. sounds.
3. Typesetting is hard on the eyes. It could be a bit bigger and larger spaced. I think that would make this a lot easier to read.

In general I think they're passable, but they could use editing.

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@CEDR777: thanks for the translation. love Arsenal work.

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so this translated manga is the sign of birth of a new translator ? Welcome , we always can use more .

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its decent. also the sfx don't really matter if you use imagination.

also that guy is more virile than most ppl.

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yo holmes,
Amazing job on translating, it's a really great thing that you're doing, but yeah, definately work on the font and typesetting.
It's (Or at least it seems to be) a pretty simple thing to change, and it actually really does improve the reader's experience in a big way.
Other than that, do pretty much what you want with the translations as long as it makes sense and the plot is coherent.

No matter what you are a champion for doing what you're doing.

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I think the people at LWB are looking for translators and are willing to teach you how to typeset, translate, and other things as well. You could check them out and submit your work for them for criticizing and suggestions. There are more translators out there lately, but still so many untranslated works. Always appreciate those who translate them.

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@CEDR777: i'm fairly certain your galleries are visible, but only on e-hentai.org. i guess its where the 'questionable' material is visible. google 'e-hentai.org' and you should find some tutorials on how to get here. its somewhat convoluted, but worth it, especially in your case.

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poor bastard, that's why u should always ware a condom

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lol there's no way on earth you have those big breasts if you haven't got your period yet

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This is really good, and I think I'm lucky because I discovered this artist with a "Rosario + Vampire" doujin XD

Found a new interesting and really awesome artist! Besides, this manga... I think it could be great if there will be a sequel of it, but it's good because it has everything: lovely dumb and beautiful girl, anal, perverted protagonist and a back story. This is an epic win for me.

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"i'm fairly certain your galleries are visible, but only on e-hentai.org. i guess its where the 'questionable' material is visible. google 'e-hentai.org' and you should find some tutorials on how to get here. its somewhat convoluted, but worth it, especially in your case."

This is because incest is filthy and disgusting and utterly wrong to have in plain sight, so shadow site..... but.... guro, netorare, torture, and monster rape is A OK for all to see.................... yeah I think it's fucking retarded too

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