This is a cute story, and, I loved it but the grammatical mistakes are very glaring. I also don't like how the font kept changing. I'd like to see maybe two or three fonts at most otherwise it just looks very indecisive and ugly.

I appreciate the effort to translate but this release could have used a lot more checking and quality control.

Base +10, Gitami +11, m42a +17, Bane13 +33, cm4000 +6

http://www.doujinshi.org/book/566232/
RAW: /g/475696/c929767712/
Spanish Translation: /g/501995/16472ada6f/

Base +30, cm4000 +6

@shadowjin : you are the one being wrong here

Base +5, cm4000 +6