RAW: /s/7893f63786/507768-184
Magazine version: /g/508225/c3bf71490d/
DDL: http://www.mediafire.com/?3c5aj07yp27fa5m

Translated by CGRASCAL, all I did was editing the script into the tank scans and doing some minor tweaking/rebuilding here and there because the magazine censorship was terrible.

If you see mistakes or something feel free to point it out.

Nicely done. Have you considered sending this to CGRascal to see if he'll host the updated version on his site?

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I came to fap and ended up smiling.

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As I was reading this I was like, "what's the deal with this plot development?!" But in the end I couldn't help but think that this was so cute!!! x)

And 154 cm... The guy is so short! But they were so cute together, Haha :)

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Makes me wonder how I'd react if someone was that blunt with me.

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I find it hot more than I find it sweet.

SpyManHAW: I've edited some minor things (you can see them if you read the original) but I sure am no translation checker (I don't go beyond basic kana reading and the general meaning of short terms or sfx) , I can't completely turn a translation upside down just to make it sound right, I don't have the right to, it would be borderline rewrite.

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I'm sure i'm not the first person to point this out, but in pretty much every one of CGRascal's translations, the english is... awkward. Not so awkward that you can't understand it, but just unnatural. I guess I can't really complain since i'm getting this shit for free but it's just something i've noticed that can be improved on.

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This reminds me a lot of Take On Me. Well, the situation does. Not quite the resolution.

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@KouTenka Did your penis smile too? I bet it did.

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Page 11: "Pinch your hands with your free hands."

Is this the correct translation? I ask because I've seen some really weird things in manga/doujin, so I wouldn't put it past them.

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priceless @ KouTenka

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nah.......... they are too different .

it will never work .

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I appreciate the free porn, but this translation is straight up incorrect in so many places. 態度で見せてくれなきゃ伝わらないよ does not mean "You won't be able to tell me anything, so you need to show me such an attitude?". It means "you need to show me with your attitude or it won't show". Hell, that English on its own makes no sense. And these kinds of mistakes are on every other page. Not sure why people pay for this near-google-translate level of work.

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...Kind of reminds me Take on Me...

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that ending, it's hilarious to see their expression
with a placed hashtags: #iknowhowyoufeel

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