trying to get something down on paper to transfer over into manga studio to refine and thought i would share to see what you guys think and for constructive crit...

Thanks

I think it's okay. (update) You're getting kinkier by the minute! Great work, most delightful.

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Vote down on my comment if you enjoy having sex with hairy 450lb men

Base +11, IconX +8, inhumano -2, wanna -26, Mawile -6, kurtis -7, Lisan -7

I agree completeley with crudebuster, using this speed-per-page i´d ecpect at least 3-5 pages between 6 and seven.
Pretty solid otherwise considering it´s drawn on paper.

UPPDATE again: Now we´re cooking. My work here is done. On a personal note tough: She looks like she´s more scared than aroused while clearly having an orgasm(No shit sherlock...). But mabye that´s what you were going for and mabye that´s what some people like, so that´s not an negative comment. I hope so see more from you in the future.

Base +12, inhumano +2, wanna -26, Mawile -6, Zorlock +6, Der Fuhrer -8

and thanks for the input ... the last drawing was sort of a draft to let you see what would happen... thanks again .... BTW if you would like to give ideas of whats to happen to her...feel free and I will try to incorporate them.... breast expansion gotcha

UPDATE: Yeah her hands are behind her back bound

UPDATE: Thanks so much for all of the encouraging words... I was going more for the shocked and scared looked.... I'm thinking of continuing with her having surges of erections and ejaculations each time getting bigger and wearing her out... let me know if you have suggestions and i will try to work with them!!!! thinking of adding tentacles to the mix to just not quite sure how to yet

UPDATE: Thanks for the critiques ... I changed the title... and will start trying to incorporate the ideas... thanks everyone

Base +7, wanna -26, Leoros +12, Mawile -6, Zorlock +6, gurotaku +10, Der Fuhrer +8

The new frames are superb.

Base +5, wanna -26, gurotaku +10

Too sudden from 6 to 7 make more in between but otherwise its verry good!

Base +9, kurtis +6, jaylou1010 +9

Not bad. Keep doing more like this maybe with more BE

Base +2, kurtis -6, gurotaku +10

I agree with the rest. And feel free to expand other elements of the female body. :-)
And use the tentacles to nipple fuck and expand her nipples maybe?

Base +5, kurtis -6, poep +8

Might you consider adding frame numbers to the images? That way, we could refer to a frame number rather than an image number that can change with updates if you were to insert a frame between two images or remove a frame (image 7 referred to below was removed.)

Base +28, Spring Heeled +8, jaylou1010 +9

Really nice sequence! Can you add some more pictures, maybe with more injection? Thanks for post!

Update - Thanks for the addition. Carry on the good work!

Base +2

Looking good so far.

Base +10

awesome..would like to see that tentacle sucking on she cock

Base +4

You really shouldn't use a comment for a title. It leaves us with no idea what to expect.

Base +27

Try to make the scenario a bit more legit cause frankly the whole dick randomly appearing above the vagina is boring. Instead make the clitoris keep transforming and getting bigger eventually becoming a dick it makes it look more natural.. Hope you take this into consideration once you add the final touches.

Base +2

Not bad, the artwork is improving. The main criticism I have is the presence of those lines. There distracting. It would also be nice to know why she's keeping her arms behind her and why she's not presenting much resistance to this.

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